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Are these sentences correct?

1. "I just want them to know that we are in their lives always."

- what I want to express here is, we are always by this side to support, care and love them always. So, "we are in their lives always" is the right phrasing in expressing this meaning?

2. "I hope this can give him more good and deep memories in his childhood about his own family. I think this is precious. And hope that this can strengthen his sense of family tie."

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1. "I just want them to know that we are in their lives always."
- what I want to express here is, we are always by this side to support, care and love them always. So, "we are in their lives always" is the right phrasing in expressing this meaning?- Yours sounds too intrusive. 'I just want them to know that we are always here for them.'

2. "I hope this can give him better childhood memories about his own family. I think this is important, and I hope that it strengthens his sense of family."
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Thank you so much, M Micawber! Your teaching always make me feel more confidence in writing English. I really learned a lot from you Emotion: smile