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I was at the lowest point in my life. For the first time, I felt like I couldn’t breathe, having to face with such animosity, whilst dealing with all the pressure all on my own.

I would call home every day, seeking temporary solace from my parents and sisters, spending more than an hour on the phone.

But the problems that I faced did not go away. I was not able to solve them, and the frustrations and depression was still deeply inset within me.

Are the words in bold correctly used? Is 'with' unecessary? Should 'was' be were'? Are there any parts that can be improved on?

Thanks in advance.
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Yoong LiatI was at the lowest point in my life. For the first time, I felt like I couldn’t breathe, having to face with such animosity, whilst dealing with all the pressure all on my own.

I would call home every day, seeking temporary solace from my parents and sisters, spending more than an hour on the phone.

But the problems that I faced did not go away. I was not able to solve them, and the frustrations and depression was still deeply inset ?? within me.

Are the words in bold correctly used? Is 'with' unecessary? Emotion: no Should 'was' be were'? Emotion: yes Are there any parts that can be improved on?

Thanks in advance.

'inset' doesn't flow very well here....perhaps just 'set'?
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Many thanks, Philip, for your constructive comments.