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Hi everyone!

"when I went there, my first feeling was as if I were frozen"

Is this sentence correct in writing? Is it natural?

Thanks all! ^^

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anonymousIs this sentence correct in writing?

It is not a sentence because it starts and ends wrong.

anonymous Is it natural?

Not to me. Wording aside, I can't tell what it means. Was "there" Antarctica? Or maybe my ex-wife was in the room. Just kidding.

There is a conflict between "feeling" and "as if". It's already just a feeling, so it is already as if something.