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Some commentators argue that as a part of learning a foreign language, learners should spend several months learning its language and culture by living overseas. Personally, I completely disagree with this point of view.

It’s undeniable that a few months spent in another country would create a golden chance for students to learn new cultures and languages by immersing themselves in the language. Nevertheless, they possibly forget one thing: we can immerse ourselves in language everywhere- no matter where in the world. We can start to fit our language studies into regular routine, but nothing else has to change. The familiarity of the job, our neighborhood, friends, and life, in general, is still there. For instance, by changing all language settings in social media to our target language, we can easily adapt and dip into linguistic. In addition, we also know we need to put forth active effort from day one—not after few months of passively learning overseas.

At the same, not everyone has the finances to studying abroad. Moving to another country, from dealing with culture shock to adapting to workplace dynamics even the most simple tasks like buying our personal item is complicated while we can just easily learning the language at your comfort home with an Internet connection, easier and cheaper. Many students gave up and want to come back to their native country since not only experienced homesick feeling and anxiety they also have to bear the financial burden from hometown. Only a few can overcome the difficulties and study abroad because they have financial backup without any worry.

In conclusion, I believe that it’s often challenging for students to studying language in a foreign country but learning at home is feasible not only in commercial but also learning process.

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As a part of education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture.Do you agree or disagree

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Some commentators (That is a TV new reporter. Is that what you mean?) argue that as a part of learning a foreign language, learners should spend several months overseas learning its language and culture by living overseas. Personally, I completely disagree with this point of view.

It’s (Do not use contractions in formal writing.) undeniable that a few months spent in another country would create a golden opportunity chance for students to learn new cultures and languages by immersing themselves in the language. Nevertheless, they possibly forget one thing: we can immerse ourselves in language everywhere- no matter where in the world. We can start to fit our language studies into our regular routine, and but nothing else has to change. The familiarity of our the job, our neighborhood, friends, and life, in general, is still there. For instance, by changing all language settings in social media to the our target language we want to learn, we can easily experience its grammar and vocabulary. adapt and dip into linguistic. In addition, we also know we need to put forth active effort from day one—not after simply a few months of passively learning overseas.

At the same, not everyone has the financial resources for finances to studying abroad. Moving to another country, from dealing with culture shock to adapting to workplace dynamics even the most simple tasks like buying our personal item (wrong form) is (wrong form) complicated while we can just as easily learn learning the language in the comfort of our home at your comfort home with an Internet connection; it is both easier and cheaper. Many students gave (wrong form) up and want to come back to their native country since not only experienced (wrong form) homesick feeling and anxiety they also have to bear the financial burden from hometown. (wrong expressions) Only a few can overcome these difficulties and study abroad because they have financial backup without any worry.

In conclusion, I believe that it’s often challenging for students to studying (wrong form) language in a foreign country but learning at home is feasible for everyone. not only in commercial but also learning process. (Unnatural, awkward)