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The first bar chart illustrates the average of prices in house in 1995 and 2013 in England and its center, London and the second chart shows average house prices in London and other areas in England in 2013.

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The first bar chart illustrates (Do not use illustrate for graphs and charts. Use it for pictures and diagrams.) the average of prices in house in 1995 and 2013 in England and its center, London and the second chart shows average house prices in London and other areas in England in 2013.

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Thanh TúEngland and its center, London

This does not make sense. It would be better to replace that word with capital.

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