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Hi teachers. Is became aware of it perfect in this context?

Jess entered. The first thing she saw was the jam on Karl's suit. Karl looked down at himself and became aware of it.

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anonymous

Hi teachers. Is became aware of it perfect in this context?

Jess entered. The first thing she saw was the jam on Karl's suit. Karl looked down at himself and became aware of it.

I wouldn't call it perfect, exactly. It works, but it seems a bit dry and dramatic for the context.

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anonymousIs became aware of it perfect all right ...?

'perfect' is unidiomatic in this kind of question.

CJ