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1 Behind that cute smile is an insolant brat who expects people to give all he wants.

2 You have to score more times than (the amonut of shots the) goal keeper stops your shots.
Expects works.
...expects people to give him all he wants.

2)?? You yave to shoot more times than you score because the goal keeper stops some of your shots.
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