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Please correct any mistakes for me .Thank you

Receptionist : Hello, good morning. King's Hotel .Can I help you?
Tourist : Hello, good morning. Yes, I would like to make a reservation for three days. So may I know the exact location
of King's Hotel ?

Receptionist : Oh, King's Hotel is in Wales and it is in the town area.There are many shopping malls near the hotel. It is
only 15 minutes ride from the airport to the hotel if you take the taxi. It's very convienient.

Tourist : It sounds good. Can I know what are the charges for the room?

Receptionist : A single room is 60 pounds and a double room is 80 pounds. We charge 100 pounds for a family suite and
an extra bed costs 20 pounds.May I know how many persons are coming with you, madam?

Tourist : There are four of us including my husband and my two kids. I plan to have a double room overlooking the
beach.
Receptionist : O.k. madam I'll arrange everything for you.

Tourist : What other facilities are available in the hotel?

Receptionist : All the rooms have central heating and air conditioning. We also have rooms overlooking the beach and
also facing the road. There is a large wsimmimg poolarea at the sixth floor. We have two restaurants
serving western and eastern cuisine. I hope all these information can help you, madam?
Tourist : Yes, marvellous! I think you may reserve a double room for me now.
Receptionist : O.K madam. Can I have your name, telephone number and address for the reservation, please ?
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I think you will get more help if you reformat your dialog. I know I'm not willing to go through it as it is currently formatted.

Receptionist: blah blah
Tourist: blah
R:
T:

etc.
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R: Hello. Good Morning. King's Hotel. Can I help you
T: Hello, good morning. Yes, I would like to make a reservation for three days. Can you tell/give me the exact location of the hotel?
R Oh, we are in Wales. (This is too general to be ablt to say in the town) you need to add the name of a town eg. we are situated in the centre of Cardiff. There are shopping centres near the hotal. It's only 15 minutes from the airport by taxi.
T: It sounds good. How much are the rooms?
R: A single room costs 60 pounds and a double (room) is 80 pounds. We have family suites available for 100 pounds with extra beds costing 20 pounds each. How many people will be coming with you Madam?
T: There are four of us, 2 adults and 2 children. I would like a double room with a view of the beach.
R: Ok Madam, I can arrange everthing for you.
T: What facilities do you have in the hotel?
R: All our rooms have central heating and air conditionong. We have rooms overlooking the beach and some facing the road. There is a large swimming pool area on the sixth floor. We have two restaurants serving European and Chinese/Indian cuisine. I hope all this information is useful, Madam
T: Yes, marvellous! I would like to book a double room now please.
R: Ok, Madam. Can I have your name, telephone number abd address for the reservation, please?
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With the understanding that I'm a speaker of U. S. not U. K. English.

Just a few comments.

Using both "hello" and "good morning" seems overdone, one or the other is better. In fact the receptionist is more likely to say simply "King's Hotel, may I help you."
give me the exact location (not tell me)
Answering "we are in Wales" in response to a request for the exact location seems unhelpful. Presumably the tourist will already know both the country and city and is asking for the street address.
Try out our live chat room.
Thanks for your help. I did type the right way but it came out like this so it must be quite hard to read. sorry