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Now Jane’s boss trusts her. The boss let her bring her laundry and the important documents to her mansion. She told her exactly where to put the documents and her laundry. The laundry should be hung on the closet and the documents should be put on the table by the flowers. When she saw few flowers here and there, she was confused. Then she heard the boss’s twin daughters speaking at her in the above stairways. She asked the twins where she should put the documents. The twin asked her to bring it up so she began to walk up. She was walking up and heard the big noise. Her boss and her husband were fighting. Then they stopped when they saw Jane.

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Hi,

Now Jane’s boss trusts her. <<< Do you want to use present tense here?

The boss let Jane bring her laundry and the important documents to her mansion. She told Jane exactly where to put the documents and her laundry. The laundry had to be hung in the closet and the documents had to be put on the table by the flowers. When Jane saw a few flowers here and there, she was confused. Then Jane heard the boss’s twin daughters speaking to her from upstairs. She asked the twins where she should put the documents. The twins asked her to bring them up so she began to walk up. While she was walking up, she heard a big noise. Her boss and her husband were fighting. Then they stopped when they saw Jane.

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Thank you very much, Clive.

Yes, I want to use present here.

Can I use presente perfect?

Now Jane's boss has trusted her.
Hi,

No. Just use Simple Present.

Clive
Thanks Clive
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