Brother Marriage invitation Letter

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Please correct the below invitation letter;....

Hi Friend

I hereby invite you and your family for my Brother wedding ,which is going to be held on 10th of September, 2009 at St.Joseph’s Church, Manchadi, EraviputhoorKadai and the functions related to that. Your esteemed presence on this joyful occasion is highly appreciated. Herewith I have attached the wedding invitation. Please find the same.

Regards
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Try:
Dear name,
I like to invite you and your family to my brother's wedding, to be held on September 10, 2009, at St.Joseph’s Church, Manchadi, EraviputhoorKadai. Your esteemed presence on this joyful occasion is highly appreciated. Enclosed is the wedding invitation.

Chris
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Thank You ,Chris

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Anonymous:
Thank Chris....
Anonymous:
It's My pleasure to invite you to the wedding ceremony of My Younger brother, Mr. xxxx on Sunday, the 00th November 20** Marriage after 11:30am at the place wedding hall and the functions related to that.





Herewith I have attached the wedding invitation, please treat this Invitation as a Direct Invitation. We will be honored by your presence on this Joyful occasion and request all to pray for them.
Anonymous:
rameshpaulaian esteemed
hope you enjoy the marriage
Anonymous:
i want one and half page this is very short
Anonymous:
AnonymousIt's My pleasure to invite you to the wedding ceremony of My Lovable brother, Mr.k.m.shanth kumar with Pallavi on Thursday 21st April 2016 Marriage at 9:45 to 10:45 at sree veerabhadra swamy temple palthur . Herewith I have attached the wedding invitation, please treat this Invitation as a Direct Invitation. We will be honored by your presence on this Joyful occasion and request all to pray for them.