Hi I want to put the following paragraph on my website. Could you please read it and let me know if I need to edit or rewrite any part of it. Thanks a lot.
== Building Computer:
Buying already build computer is not good idea, Why? because you will buy something is not build to match your needs.
It could have parts and components that you do not need and that means you are paying for things you will not use. However, custom build computer will be build to match your need and you will use each part of it, so it is smart idea. The bottom line is that custom build computer will save your money. Let me help you building your dream computer.
Hi I want to put the following paragraph on my website. Could you please read it and let me know ... The bottom line is that custom build computer will save your money. Let me help you building your dream computer.

Yes, you need to scrap it completely, because it's cheaper to buy a mass-produced computer even if it has parts that you will never use.

john
That is not true. I do not want to argue this now, but if you are in business of building computer you would know
it is cheaper to build one. Is like buying 4 door seedan car. car A manufactured by ABC and car B manufactured by XYZ. Both have 4 tires, 4 doors, etc but are they the same?? I can build $500 computer and Dell can build the same for $500, but they would use cheaper components for example cheap memory of size 128M , my computer use the same size memory 128M but it is faster.. for average buyer they would think Dell is better deal. So you need to educate them. Any way I need help to edit that pragraph not to discuss that issue now.
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Thanks a lot Bob For your kind help. I really appreciate it. Take care.