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Desert Oasis Hotel

Out of this world experience



Oasis Hotel in Dubai

Al Sofouh Road

Dubai

United Arab Emirates(UAE)



Phone: (971) 4 399 4444 Fax: (971) 4 399 4200

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26th February 2011



Mr R Harash

International Camel Racing Committee

Riyadh 11693

Saudi Arabia



Dear Mr R Harash



THE INTERNATIONAL CAMEL RACING COMPETITION



I am a manager of Oasis Hotel in Dubai and we are glad to offer you and your committee members to stay at our Hotel with 10% discount.



We are pleased to offer you our services. Only in our hotel you can taste high level service and enjoy majestic opulent interior.


  • Free welcome drinks (unlimited)
  • Plethora of exotic fruits and Southern sweets
  • Food and beverage services are available 24 four hours a day in 10 different restaurants
  • Meeting rooms
  • Banquets/opulent ballrooms
  • World class casino with two floors and gaming machines
  • Transport facilities
  • The first visit to spa for free
  • Swimming pool (open 24 hours a day)
  • Entertainment system in each room (home cinema, karaoke, balcony with overlook on gardens, sea and cascade fountains
  • Huge golf course all other things that can please you
Also we would be glad to advertise and promote your competition if you would like to

All that you can enjoy in our hotel!



We would be glad to show you around our marvelous hotel.

I look forward to your reply!

Asima S.
General manager
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Oasis Hotel in Dubai
Al Sofouh Road
Dubai, UAE

26 February 2011

Mr R Harash
International Camel Racing Committee
Riyadh 11693, Saudi Arabia

Dear Mr Harash,

Subj: INTERNATIONAL CAMEL RACING COMPETITION

The Oasis Hotel in Dubai is delighted to offer you and your committee members accommodations at a 10% discount.

Only at the Oasis Hotel can you enjoy the finest service in the most opulent surroundings. Our services include:

* * Unlimited free welcome drinks
* * Plethora of exotic fruits and southern sweets
* * Food and beverage services 24 hours in 10 different restaurants
* * Meeting rooms
* * Banquet and opulent ballrooms
* * World-class casino with two floors of gaming machines
* * Full transportation facilities
* * Free first visit to spa
* * Swimming pool open 24 hours
* * Entertainment system (home cinema, karaoke) in each room, balcony with garden, sea and cascade fountain views
* * 18-hole golf course and many other extras

We would also be happy to advertise and promote your competition. Let us show you around our marvelous facilities.

I look forward to hearing from you. Please contact me via phone (971) 4 399 4444, fax (971) 4 399 4200, or e-mail, [email protected]

Best regards,

Asima S.
General Manager
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I am writing to inform you that we expect extra guests in our hotel. There are 30 members from International Camel Racing Committee which must be met worthily and respectively.

I want you TO:

· Prepare 30 luxury rooms

· The chef must be aware to prepare a special menu for the 12th September and for the following week

· Housekeeping team has to know to prepare rooms well

· Make sure all vehicles are in perfect condition

· Check all equipment at the hotel, including air conditioners, telephones, pools, etc.

· Wash the rest of the hotel by 12th September

· Your form must be in perfect condition



All staff have to attend assembly on Monday, 14th March at 11a.m.
This is to inform you that we are expecting special guests at our hotel from [date] through [date] – 30 members of the International Camel Racing Committee, who must be met courteously and respectfully.

Please do the following:

· Prepare 30 luxury single rooms
· The chef must prepare special menus for these days
· Housekeeping team must prepare rooms with added care

· Make sure all vehicles are in perfect condition
· Check all facilities and equipment, including air conditioners, telephones, pools, etc.
· Clean the rest of the hotel by 12th September
· Ensure that you are all prepared to offer your best hospitality

All staff will attend a meeting on Monday, March 14th at 11 a.m.
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