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It is undenied that online shopping has gained popularity toward all people, those buying anything such as books, air tickets and groceries. While I accept that there are some drawbacks of buying on the Internet, I believe that it still have its benefits.

On the one hands, buying things on the internet means that people will have to cope with risks such as fake and poor quality products receive or wrong goods. Indeed, these wares overspread on many different selling websites and people only choose them through images. Therefore, they do not know how quality of them. In addtion, unlike buying at the store, people could be delivered incorrect goods because the amount of people those ordering is a lot and uncontrolled.

However, I would argue that these positive aspects is outweighed by the weaknesses. Convienence and better price are the biggest advantages, they are plus points which help online shopping is becoming more and more popular. Web-based stores are usually opend all time, this mean people can make purchases when they have desire and spare time. This is helpful to busy people, who have no time to visit stores. Furthermore, most online stores is offer lower price, as well as having various bargains that help save even more money. The best way to pay less is compare to price of different online stores, online shopping make prices comparison quicker and simpler.

In conclusion, there are minus points to buy things on the Internet. However, it seems to me that its advantages would be more important.

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It is undenied that Online shopping has gained in popularity toward among all people, those buying anything such as books, air tickets and groceries. (That does not make sense and it is ungrammatical). While I accept that there are some drawbacks of buying on the Internet, I believe that it still have (subject/verb mismatch) its benefits.

On the one hands, (wong form) buying things on the internet means that people will have to cope with risks such as fake and poor quality products receive or wrong goods. (That does not make sense and it is ungrammatical). Indeed, these wares (wong word, wong form) overspread (wong word) on many different selling websites and people only choose them through images. Therefore, they do not know how their quality of them. In addtion, unlike buying at the store, people could be sent delivered incorrect goods because the number amount of people those ordering them is a lot and uncontrolled.

However, I would argue that these positive aspects (You just wrote about negative things like poor quality and wrong products being shipped. This does not make any sense.) is (subject/verb mismatch) outweighed by the weaknesses. Convienence and better price are the biggest advantages. They are plus points which help online shopping is becoming (wong form) more and more popular. Web-based stores are usually opend all time, this mean (wong form) people can make purchases when they have the desire and spare time. This is helpful to busy people, who have no time to visit stores. Furthermore, most online stores is (wong form) offer (wong form) lower price, as well as having various bargains that help save even more money. The best way to pay less is compare to price (wong form) of different online stores. Online shopping make prices (wong form) comparison (wong form) quicker and simpler.

In conclusion, there are minus points to buy things on the Internet. However, it seems to me that its advantages would be more important.