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The two illustrations highlight the changes that will occur in the Southwest airport next year.
It is clear that after renovation, the airport will become much more modern and dynamic with six new features can be seen from the second diagram. The main differences in the airport are the enlargement of old gates and the introduction of the ATM and Car Hire.
Looking at the information in more detail, the gates will be expanded for 10 more into a Y-shape with a new sky train system in the middle of the way. The area of security and passport control will still remain couple with a new construction of shopping region before entering the unchange area.
Inside the departures, check-in box will be demolished to make way for a bag drop, it then will relocate to the opposite side of it before. In terms of the arrivals area, a new café would be erected in the northeast, there will be a place which will have been extended for a new ATM machine and the appearance of car hire in the southeast of the airport.

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The two illustrations highlight the changes that will occur in the Southwest airport next year.
It is clear that after renovation, the airport will become much more modern and dynamic with six new features can be seen from the second diagram. The main differences in the airport are the enlargement of old gates and the introduction of the ATM and Car Hire.

Looking at the information in more detail, the gates will be expanded for 10 more into a Y-shape with a new sky train system in the middle of the way. The area of security and passport control will still remain couple with a new construction of shopping region before entering the unchange area.

Inside the departures, check-in box will be demolished to make way for a bag drop, it then will relocate to the opposite side of it before. In terms of the arrivals area, a new café would be erected in the northeast, there will be a place which will have been extended for a new ATM machine and the appearance of car hire in the southeast of the airport.

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The two illustrations highlight the changes that will occur in the Southwest airport next year.
It is clear that (Avoid dummy-it clauses. They convey no information. Delete) after renovation, the airport will become much more modern and dynamic (Do not write opinions in Task 1.) with six new features can be seen (Ungrammatical. A full clause cannot be used a the object of a preposition.) from the second diagram. The main differences in the airport are the enlargement of old gates (The gates are not larger. There is a larger number of them.) and the introduction of the ATM and Car Hire.

(You did not clearly separate the first and second paragraphs.)

Looking at the information (Verbose. Delete extraneous words that say nothing about the maps.) in more detail, the number of gates will be expanded for 10 more into a Y-shape with a new sky train system in the middle of the way. The area of security and passport control will still remain couple (wrong word .) with a new construction of shopping region (wrong word) before entering the unchange (wrong word) area.
(You do not need a fourth paragraph.)


Inside the departures, check-in box (wrong word) will be demolished (Not a good word choice.) to make way for a bag drop, (comma splice error) it then will relocate (wrong verb form ) to the opposite side of it before. In terms of the arrivals area, a new café would be erected in the northeast, (comma splice error) there will be a place which will have been extended for a new ATM machine and the appearance (Not a good word choice.) of car hire in the southeast of the airport.


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The two diagrams show the current layout of Southwest Airport, and plans for its expansion over the next year.

Overall, after the construction is complete, the airport will have more than twice as many gates for planes to dock and a new sky train to transport passengers to and from the main terminal. It will also have several new services, especially for arriving passengers. The main terminal will have more entrance and exit doors and be slight enlarged to accommodate a car hire desk.

In detail, there will be 18 gates for planes, compared to the current 8. The new gate area will be a Y-shaped expansion with a few new shops. The main terminal is still divided into arrivals and departures. In the arrivals area, there will be three new services: car hire, an ATM machine and a café. The departures area will have a new baggage drop service; the passenger check-in desk and the café will be relocated. The passport control and security area, which is located between the terminal and the gate area, will not be changed.