Cam 1, Test 2, Writing Task 1?

The diagram below illustrates the [ 1] ways methods used by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology for forecasting the weather.

There are four stages in this process, [ 2] begging beginning with the collection of [ 3] informations data, processing and analysis of that data, compilation and preparation of reports, and eventually broadcasting the weather forecast. they will be analysed and forocasted. Then, the preparing the broadcast step will be done by the computer with the resulting data of the previous step, and finally they are broadcasted to the public.

Looking at the left half of in detail at the process, there are three main techniques ways to collect of gathering the weather data and subsequently, three ways procedures of analyzing this collected information. figure. Firstly , incoming information can be received by the satellite and it will be analysed by using the satellite photo. The same data also can be collected by the radar station and the drifting bouy and it is transmitted through the radar screen or synoptic chart to analyse.

Regarding the rest of the process, the analysed data will be sent to the computer to preparing the broadcast. And final step, it is delivered to the public on television, on the radio or on the recorded announcement.

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The rest is really poorly phrased and unnecessarily complicated. There are plenty of pictures and words for you to work with. Take one process or line at a time and describe it clearly. Be direct and focus on the idea, not on complicating your phrasing. Try again and post your revised text below.

[ 1]: “way” is not wrong, but there are more formal alternatives.

[ 2]: “begging” and “beginning” have completely different meanings.

[ 3]: “information” is never countable.

The diagram illustrates the process of collecting up to date data about the weather condition in order for valid forecast demonstration by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology.

Overall, there are three stages in the production of forecast. Meanwhile, the information goes through three factors, such as satellite, radar and drifting buoy.

In the first stage, received information is analysed and forecasted by satellite photo, radar screen and synoptic chart. The satellite information is tested via all three categories. Radar collected details are reviewed with the help of radar screen andsynoptic chart. Only in drifting buoy method of incoming data it is used one technique of analysing. Then, predicted facts are sent to preparation together.

Finally, collected materials are ready to broadcast in three procedures: TV newsreader, radio and recored announcement by phones

The diagram illustrates the process of collecting up-to-date data about weather conditionin order for valid forecast demonstration by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology.
Overall, there are three stages in the production of forecast. Meanwhile, the information goes through three factors such as satellite, radar and drifting buoy.
In the first stage, received information is analysed and forecasted by the satelllite photo, radar screen and synoptic chart. Satellite information is tested via all three categories. Radar collected details are reviewed with the help of radar screen and synoptic chart. Only in drifting buoy method of incoming data it is used one method of analysing . Then, predicted facts are sent to the preparation together.
Finally, collected materials are ready to broadcast in three procedure: TV newsreader, radio and recorded announcement by phone

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The diagram illustrates the process of collecting how up-to-date data about weather conditions is collected in order for valid accurate weather forecast demonstration reports to be produced by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology.

Overall, there are three stages in the production of forecasts – collection of weather data, computer analysis, and production and broadcasting of weather bulletins. Meanwhile, the information goes through three factors such as satellite, radar and drifting buoy.

In the first stage, received the information, including temperature and air pressure readings, and humidity levels, received from radar, sea buoys and weather satellites is analysed by advanced computers using complicated mathematical models. This allows for the production of satellite photos and radar screenshots which show rain and cloud cover, and marine synoptic charts which indicate the changes in pressure levels for the land and sea in Australia. With all that information, media organizations can produce weather forecast bulletins in various formats. Thus, weather reports can be aired on TV as part of the news, broadcast on radio programs, or even sent as prerecorded phone messages to individuals. and forecasted by the satelllite photo, radar screen and synoptic chart. Satellite information is tested via all three categories. Radar collected details are reviewed with the help of radar screen and synoptic chart. Only in drifting buoy method of incoming data it is used one method of analysing . Then, predicted facts are sent to the preparation together.

Finally, collected materials are ready to broadcast in three procedure: TV newsreader, radio and recorded announcement by phone

Given pictogram is about how the Australia Bureau of Meteorology gathers information in order to forecast accurate weather report.

Firstly when considering data collecting mechanisms mainly satellite, radar and drifting buoy use to collect data in surface, land and sea accordingly. They function separately as well as they are interconnected.

Secondly when considering analyzing systems, the satellite send the satellite images in surface and crate radar images on ground level. Further it also create synoptic chart when gathering information on weather in sea. The analyzing and forecasting method of radar is using a radar screen while drifting buoy uses synoptic chart to analyst. Both radar and drifting buoy cannot use to gather weather information in the surface. But both help to collect data on weather in sea .

Thirdly the computer plays major role when preparation of the weather report to broadcast. It gather all information received in above three sources and finalize it in to one report.

Finally Television, Radio and Telephone help to communicate weather forecast through visual, audible manner. Telephone use to record report and later announce it to public.

Overall modern technology use to provide reliable whether forecasting as it is essential part of the day to day activities of human beings.