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I'm writting a research paper to argue the gap between rich and poor. Can you give me more advice or examples? Thank you

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The Effect of Gap between Rich and Poor

The gap between rich and poor getting widen around the world. In some

country like US and China the gap growing very fast.



The income of the CEO which is in a bigest company is more than 100 times as worker's wage in 1992. In 2000, the CEO’s wage in the bigest company is more than 475 times as worker’s wage.



A June 2005 survey by the National of Statistics indicated that the richest 10% of Chinese control 45% of the country's wealth. The poorest 10% of Chinese control only 1.4% of wealth.



Negative side:

Point : society unrest

"For those working in the bottom half of the pay scale, they're under an enormous amount of pressure,"

Such inequities are making their struggle for survival more difficult on a daily basis

China Labor Organization's minister Hai Su said:" the income gap between rich and poor in China keep getting worse since 2003, and It maybe course society unsteadiness in 2010, If the govenment do not take effective step."

The rich people and poor people live in the two total different world. they have different thought and different Personal values, so the difference may bring many society conflict.

French riot at the end of last year, and one of the important reason is rich and poor districts

Back in 10 years ago, there was a large riots in LosAngeles, and the U.S media reports that the main reason of riot is rich and poor district.

There also a big civil unrest in France in 2005, the discriminate poor people and gap between rich and poor districts are one of the main cause.

Point: may affect health



The gap between rich and poor may affect the overall health status of a state.

“A article in The Washington Post reports on the growing awareness among researchers that the greater the income inequality in a country, the higher the death rates for infants and adults and the lower the life expectancy—for the whole society, not just the poor.”



Economy develop

Positive side:

There some person say the gap between rich and poor is not all negative effect.

The rich people can activated poor people to improve their knowledge to become rich/
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The Effect of Gap between Rich and Poor

In the streets, a person having ragged clothes. His ribs are plainly countable. Malnutrition is only word to describe his condition. He live in a street. Food is a luxury thing to him. His life doesn’t allow for the basic essentials of food, shelter, or clothing. This is picture of a homeless in the street, and there many of them in the world. On the other side, rich people buy a suit of furniture for eight million dollar. The gap between rich and poor is wide, and is getting even wider in many areas of the world. There few people think the issue between rich and poor is not normal and it’s can’t bring any negative effect; however, the gap between the rich and poor widened and the living standards of the laborers went from bad to worse and it can cause many adverse problems.

“In just 20 years, China has gone from having virtually no income gap to having one of the world's biggest,” said Lu Zhiqiang, deputy director of the government's Development Research Center. These days, the wealth gap is evident everywhere in China, Elderly people digging though downtown dustheap for plastic bottles to recycle. Rich people live in luxury villas in Shanghai’s banlieue. A June survey by the National Bureau of Statistics indicates that the richest 10% of Chinese control 45% of the country's wealth, while the poorest 10% control only 1.4%. As you can see the gap between rich and poor issue is real serious in current world.

If the gap between rich and poor is continue to increase, it can aggravate social conflict. "For those working in the bottom half of the pay scale, they're under an enormous amount of pressure," said Mark Zandi, chief economist at Economy.com. Back to 1992, there was a big riot in Los Angeles, and 53 people died during the riots. In addition to the immediate trigger of the Rodney King verdict, the inequities between rich and poor is one of factors reasons for the unrest. In 2005, there was a series of riots and violent clashes in France. One of the reasons for this civil unrest was local police discriminate and overuse violence in slums. The main reason for the slums in the society is the income gap between rich and poor. In short, the gap between rich and poor is one major factor that cause social unsteadiness

Research has shown a clear link between inequality of rich and poor and economic growth. The gap between rich and poor can obstruct economic development in a country. Several recent economists have investigated the relationship between inequality and economic growth using econometrics. In their study for Development Economics Research, They conclude that high levels of inequality negatively impacts growth, due to "incentive traps, erosion of social cohesion, social conflicts, and uncertain property rights". In conclusion, the inequality between rich and poor only have negative effect to the economy of country.

The gap between rich and poor may affect the overall health status of a society. A article in The Washington Post reports that the greater the income gap in a country, the higher the death rates for children and adults and the lower expectation of life—for the whole society, not just the poor people. Because poor people worry only about life basis, they don’t have time and money to worry about health care. “The gap between rich and poor is a key factor in determining the health status of a country—or a state,” reported by Harvard School of Public Health researchers. In short, income inequality appears to exact a societal toll that extends well beyond the economic zone. Its costs to the broad society range from society stabilization, undermining productivity, and educational status to eroding public health.

There some people proclaim that gap between rich and poor is good for the economy because it promotes economic growth. The incomes gap, they say, provide the incentives necessary to guide productive economic decisions by businesses and individuals. If we try to reduce inequality, we'll block economic development. However, these people are absolutely wrong. People will only have the motivation to work hard, and invest wisely if the economic system rewards them for good economic choices and punish for bad ones. The income gap between rich and poor only can stifles economic development.

Some of capitalists believe that the inequality provides incentives that push the society towards economically healthy and efficient behavior, and economic freedom is more important than economic equality. Another argument is that more inequality does not necessarily mean more poverty, and that although poverty is bad, inequality is not bad in itself. Thus, a policy can be considered good if it makes some wealthy people more wealthy without making anyone more poor, even though it increases the total amount of inequality.

There some people still think the inequality between rich and poor is not a primary issue; moreover, they believe the inequality also have positive effect. But, they are wrong, and the inequality already caused a series of negative effect like social unsteadiness, block economic growth, and increase death rate. The gap between rich and poor is growing fast around the world, and it will bring on much more and much serious consequences unless we can find our way out of this inequality trap.
Hi,

First of all, write a headline to your essay because the effect of gap between rich and poor is the subject of the argumentative esssay it is not a headline.In your first paragraph you don't tell us what you will talk about I mean, there is a gap between them but what kind of a gap is this?It is obvious that you are talking about negative effects but you talk about different effects e.g. one of them is social one then you tell us about econmomy and health.It will be better if you choose one of them or else it wil be a kind of research paper rather than an argumentative essay.Emotion: smileOne more thing, be careful about singular-plural paralellism and the choice of auxiliary verb.
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