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CAN ANYONE PLEASE CHECK IF I HAVE ANY GRAMMER ERROREmotion: big smile

My name is Benson Ma, i was born in the city of West Covina and now i live in the city of Arcadia. I used to eat a lots when i was about 12 years old. Now i am trying to stay off all the bad foods that are out there so i wouldn't have a heart attack sooner or later. The college i attend right now is known as California State Polytechnic of Pomona. My major as of now is in business as an accountant major. but i am planning to switch my major to some kind of Engineering major like aerospace engineering. this is my second year going to Cal Poly Pomona.
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Please capitalize all of your 'I's, and then I can check the rest of your paragraph.
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My name is Benson Ma, I was born in the city of West Covina and now I live in the city of Arcadia. I used to eat a lots when I was about 12 years old. Now I am trying to stay off all the bad foods that are out there so I wouldn't have a heart attack sooner or later. The college I attend right now is known as California State Polytechnic of Pomona. My major as of now is in business as an accountant major. but I am planning to switch my major to some kind of Engineering major like aerospace engineering. This is my second year going to Cal Poly Pomona.
My name is Benson Ma, I was born in the city of West Covina and now I live in the city of Arcadia. I used to eat a lots when I was about 12 years old. Now I am trying to stay off all the bad foods that are out there so I wouldn't have a heart attack sooner or later. The college I attend right now is known as California State Polytechnic of Pomona. My major as of now is in business as an accountant major. but I am planning to switch my major to some kind of Engineering major like aerospace engineering. This is my second year going to Cal Poly Pomona.