Hi my name is Mark i'm from Germany and iam trying to learn english.I need to write a small text about what i normally do every day...so i wrote this here:

Every day I get up at seven o clock in the morning except on weekends.
Afterwards i go downstairs to the bathroom and take a shower, when iam finished with that i go back to my
room and tidy it up. Later i have a little breackfast with a glass of milk and some breat. when iam finished with eating i prush my teath. When i am done with that
i leave my house at 07:45 and go to work by car .When i come home my mother has already cooked a meal for me which is
pretty nice. After dinner i mainly watch Tv or go out with friends.

Ps : it would be nice if you could help me with my grammar and give me tips about my text how to make it better . Thank you in advance Mark
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Mark09Hi my name is Mark i'm from Germany and iam trying to learn english.I need to write a small text about what i normally do every day...so i wrote this here:

Every day I get up at seven o clock in the morning except on weekends. Apart from weekends, I get up every day at...
Afterwards I go downstairs to the bathroom and take a shower. When I am finished with that I go back to my
room and tidy it up. Later I have a little breakfast with a glass of milk and some bread. When I am finished with eating I brush my teeth. When i am done with that
I leave my house at 07:45 and go to work by car .When I come home my mother has already cooked a meal for me, which is
pretty nice. After dinner I mainly watch tv/TV or go out with friends.

Ps : It would be nice if you could help me with my grammar and give me tips about my text how to make it better . Thank you in advance Mark

Carelessness is one of the most evident faults. You haven't checked what you have typed.

You have used "When" rather often. You could find other phrases or words to replace it.
Hi thank you so much for your advises..i didnt noticed that i made so much mistakes