TOPIC: Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address this problem? What can individual people do?

And this is my essay:

This day more and more environmental problems are caused by humans, but there are some solutions which are created to tackle this situation. In my essay, I will discuss the environmental issues and how authorities and individuals can solve this problem.

Two biggest threats to the environment are emission of greenhouse gases and waste from industries and households. Deterioration of air quality leads to the alarming rate of global warming, which is detrimental to the planet. The more the population increases, the more waste and sewage is discharged into ocean and soil, which is responsible for the coastal and soil erosion. Government should make more efforts to prevent the clearcutting problem-the main culprit of bushfire and the depletion of ozone layer. They can also run campaigns to raise people's environmental conscience. Individuals should take responsibility for what they did to the planet. It is now encouraged to use zero emission vehicles like electric bikes and cars or public transport, instead of using petrol engines. In houses, biodegradable plastic bags can be the alternatives of using single-use plastic. Moreover, people who decimate nature should be strictly punished and pay a heavy fine.

In conclusion, both governments and residents have to play their part in conservating the Earth.

You wrote only 206 words, but the expected minimum for IELTS task 2 is 250. You should also separate the problems paragraph from the solutions one.

When are you planning to sit for the IELTS test?

24.7 actually. It's a little bit hurry but I have no choice, i have to finish my profile. The other skills are fine, i aimed 7.0 overall, so do u think im gonna have an 6.0 for writting in 1 month? It might be impossible but i will try to do 1 test each day.
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It's a little bit hurry tight, but I have no choice. I have to finish my profile. The other skills are fine. I aimed am aiming for 7.0 overall, so do you think im gonna have an I can achieve 6.0 for writing in one month? It might be impossible, but I will try to do one test each day.

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The world’s natural environment is facing several major challenges. This day more and more Moreover, many of these environmental problems are caused by humans. but Nevertheless, there are some solutions which are created can be implemented by governments and individuals to tackle these problems. this situation. In my essay, I will discuss the environmental issues and how authorities and individuals can solve this problem.

The two biggest threats to the environment are emission of greenhouse gas emissions es and waste from industries and households. Deterioration of air quality leads First, greenhouse gases from car exhaust fumes, intensive farming, large-scale industries and power generation plants are major contributors to the alarming rate phenomenon of global warming, which is detrimental to the planet. In addition, the more the global population increases, the more waste and sewage is discharged into oceans and the soil, which is responsible for large-scale ecological pollution, the loss of large areas of fertile land and the disappearance of many species. the coastal and soil erosion.

Nonetheless, governments and individual people can should make more efforts take various actions to prevent further degradation of the environment. clearcutting problem-the main culprit of bushfire and the depletion of ozone layer. They First, authorities can also run campaigns to raise people's awareness of the environmental problems the world is facing. conscience. Moreover, individuals should take responsibility for what they did do to the planet and should endeavor to minimize their carbon footprints. It is now encouraged to use zero emission vehicles like electric bikes and cars or public transport, instead of using petrol engines. In houses, biodegradable plastic bags can be the alternatives to of using single-use plastic bags and packaging. Moreover, people and companies who decimate nature pollute should face be strictly punished and pay a heavy fines and penalties.

In conclusion, the major environmental problems include greenhouse gas emissions and large-scale pollution, but both governments and residents individual citizens have to play their part in conservating conserving the Earth.

Thank you for responding. I dont know how to say "finish my profile" in a clearer way but it means i cant graduate without having an ielts certification. Do u think 1 month to have a 6.0 writing is possible? Im quite nervous now.
bui phuong linhI dont know how to say "finish my profile" in a clearer way, but it means I cant graduate without having an ielts ILETS certification.

You can say:

I can't graduate without IELTS certification.

I can't finish my degree program without IELTS certification.

Please always capitalize the personal pronoun "I".

bui phuong linhDo you think one month to have get a 6.0 in writing is possible?

Yes, I think it's possible. Keep practising and learn from your mistakes. Do not abbreviate "you" to "u".

bui phuong linhI'm quite nervous now.

That's not going to help. Instead, focus your energy and efforts on practising.

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