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Hi! I want to send an e-mail with some questions about an Internacional Program for a Community College and I would apreciate it if someone could check it first.

If there is any grammar mistakes or repeated words/sentenses you can, please, correct them.

This is the e-mail:

Dear Sr. or Madam,

I am interested in applying to the English Language Studies Program (ELSP) in order to improve my English skills and I am also interested in applying to the Internacional Student Academic Program (ISAP) to earn a two-year associate degree and have the opportunity to transfer to four-year colleges and universities afterward.
Fist, I would greatly apreciate it if you could inform what are the necessary requeriments for admission into the English Language Studies Program (ELSP)?
Second, Could you please inform if I can make the ELSP after the ISAP? If so, how much would it be necessary to invest in both?
To conclude, I would like to know if you have Internacional Scholarship? In the case of an affirmative reply, I would be grateful if you could send more information about it.

Thank you for your time.
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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am interested in applying to the English Language Studies Program (ELSP) in order to improve my English skills. and I am also interested in applying to the Internacional (Are you sure that this is the correct spelling?) Student Academic Program (ISAP) to earn a two-year associate degree and have the opportunity to transfer to four-year colleges and universities afterward.
First, I would greatly appreciate it if you could inform me of what are the necessary requirements for admission into the English Language Studies Program (ELSP).
Second, Could you please inform me if I can take the ELSP after the ISAP? If so, how much would it cost for be necessary to invest in both?
To conclude, I would like to know if you have Internacional (Are you sure that this is the correct spelling?) scholarships? In the case of an affirmative reply, I would be grateful if you could send more information about it.

Thank you for your time.
Comments  
The correct spelling of the word "Internacional" is actually "International". I didn't notice it.
Thanks for helping me!