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The policy of president Lee's government toward to the recession of economy seems to hope to everything goes well for S.Korea even though the world economy is in down turn.

Considering the global economy of now days, the attempt is likely to fall flat.

We have already experienced what kinds of things happen when we don't follow the flow of the world economy.

In the 90's, when it turned into the recession, the economy of S.Korea seemingly looked fine. We could find buildings and apartments were going up every where.

In the early 2000, the world economy definitely was bad the country, however, set a good record of economic growth.

Hading out credit cars on the street, we heard the famous catch pharse -" You have worked hard. Don't concern about what will happen tomorrow. Suit yourself!" - so many times.
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The policy of president Lee's government toward to the recession of economy seems to hope to everything goes well for S.Korea even though the world economy is in a down turn.

Considering how the global economy is going of now days, the attempt is likely to fall flat.

We have already experienced the kinds of things that happen when we don't follow the flow of the world economy.

In the 90's, when it turned into the recession, the economy of S.Korea seemingly looked fine. We could find buildings and apartments were going up every where.

In the early 2000, the world economy definitely was bad; the country, however, set a good record of economic growth.

Hading out credit cars on the street, we heard the famous catch pharse -" You have worked hard. Don't concern about what will happen tomorrow. Suit yourself!" - so many times.