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Hello, can you help me correcting grammatical errors (or any other kind) and suggest corrections?
The text is a description of a hotel to be put on a website.
Thanks in advance.

P.S. i removed the hotel name Emotion: smile

'Name of the hotel goes here'

Whenever you travel for any purpose, what you intend to find is a hotel that offers a good relation quality/price ratio, a good location and a functional and modern environment with comfortable rooms.

In 'name of the hotel goes here', we guide all our action towards the client. To each one of us, each client has a face and will receive personalized treatment.
Our Public Relations office will be happy to attend your needs, giving it’s best to serve you.

Our client can also find an offer of comfortable and spacious facilities specially planned for holding conferences, meetings and other events, with state-of-the-art communication and presentation technologies which certainly will make your job easier.
Location
Our hotel is located in one of the various hills of the city of , only away from the University Hospitals and near the business district. Only 15 minutes away from the prestigious that dates from 1292 and can also easily access the historic sites of the city. is only 1 hour away from the international of , in , and 2 hours away from the international . In addition, there’s also a good road and train network that allows people to travel easily from different places to .

Historical Grounds

City of students, stage of love stories such as Pedro and Inês in which past, present and future have the lead roles. presents you with an historical trip from the roman ruins of Conímbriga ranging from the gothic architecture of Sé Velha to the baroque exuberance of Biblioteca Joanina, along with the medieval streets of downtown and the higher points of the city or the Marquês de Pombal façades.

Restaurant and Bar

Presented a magnificent panoramic façade source of natural light, the restaurant ‘O Magistrado’ is open for breakfast, lunch and dinner. The menu contains contemporary cuisine ranging from traditional Portuguese cuisine to international cuisine, including vegetarian offers. There’s also an excellent selection of wines.

The bar located in the spacious lobby attracts friend gatherings and business meetings, offering a wide variety of teas along with varied beverages from the ordinary to the most exotic. On Thursdays, Fridays and Saturdays there is also live music.

Banquets and Conferences

'Name of the hotel goes here' provides you with 6 rooms for holding events of business meetings, fully equipped with audiovisual material. These spaces are capable of different arrangements to best suit your event. The caring service of the team of the restaurant ‘Magistrado’ combined with our facilities will guarantee the success of your event.

Rooms and Suites

120 single e double including 13 junior suites spread out over 7 floors.

All rooms have:

- Air conditioning and central heating

- Safe deposit boxes

- Soundproof rooms

- Desk

- Minibar

- Music

- Hair dryer

- Telephone

- Satellite Tv, Pay TV and radio channel

- Internet connection through phone line

Available services



- Medical Care (by request)

- Babby-sitting (by request)

- Rent-a-car (by request)

- Business center (photocopier, fax, scanner, internet)

- Internet (Wireless) in public zones and meeting rooms

- 24 hour exchange

- Credit cards (Visa, Mastercard, American Express, Eurocard, Diners Club)

- Parking: garage with 150 spots

- Laundry service

- Room service: from 7.30 am to 1 pm

- Bellhop service from 7.30am to 00

- Anti-alergy room

[edit]P.S.S. somehow the text got mixed up with pasting it here from Word
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'Name of the hotel goes here'

Whenever you travel for any purpose, what you want is a hotel that offers the right balance of quality and price ratio, a good location and a functional and modern environment with comfortable rooms.

In 'name of the hotel goes here', offer this balance, with outstanding customer service. All of our energies are directed to ensuring the satisfaction of our customers. You’ll receive personal service and will be happy to attend to your needs.

[Here’s what I didn’t like: we guide all our action towards the client – this sounds like a sports metaphor – guiding action.. To each one of us, each client has a face that’s good. I think I have a face too. and will receive personalized treatment.
Our Public Relations office Public Relations talks to the media - perhaps you mean customer service? will be happy to attend your needs, giving it’s this should be its best to serve you.]

For your business needs, you’ll find comfortable and spacious facilities specifically designed for conferences, meetings and other events. Our state-of-the-art communication and presentation technologies help make your job easier. [A little more here would be good – for instance, do you have a business center that can take your faxes, etc?]

Location

Our hotel is located in one of the hills of the city of Coimbra, only 100 meters away from the University Hospitals and near the business district. It is only 15 minutes away from the prestigious and historic University of Coimbra that dates from 1292, and from the hotel, you have easy access the historic sites of the city.

Coimbra itself is only 1 hour away from the international airport of Sá Carneiro, in Oporto, and 2 hours away from the international airport of Lisbon. The city is easily accessible by road and train.

Coimbria is a city of students, and the setting for love stories, such as Pedro and Inês, in which past, present and future all play a role. Here, you can take an historical trip from the Roman ruins of Conímbriga and the Gothic architecture of Sé Velha to the Baroque exuberance of Biblioteca Joanina. Walk the medieval streets of downtown and the higher points of the city, or the Marquês de Pombal façades.

Restaurant and Bar

[Presented a magnificent panoramic façade source of natural light – I need help here. I’m not sure what you mean], the restaurant ‘O Magistrado’ is open for breakfast, lunch and dinner. The menu ranges from traditional Portuguese to international cuisine, including vegetarian offers. There’s also an excellent selection of wines. [You can’t have contemporary traditional cuisine.]

The bar located in the spacious lobby is a gathering place for friends and a place for business meetings, offering a wide variety of teas along with varied beverages from the ordinary to the most exotic. [Usually, when talking about a bar, it’s not TEA that gets mentioned first.] On Thursdays, Fridays and Saturdays, you can enjoy live music.

Banquets and Conferences

YOU MAY WANT TO PUT THE PARAGRAPH ABOVE ABOUT BUSINESS MEETINGS HERE INSTEAD.

'Name of the hotel goes here' has six meeting rooms, fully equipped with audiovisual equipment. These spaces are capable of different configurations to best suit your event. Combine the catering from our restaurant ‘Magistrado’ with our beautiful facilities and you’re sure to have a successful event.

Rooms and Suites

120 single and double rooms, including 13 junior suites, over 7 floors.

All rooms have:

- Air conditioning and central heating

- Safe deposit boxes

- Soundproof rooms

- Desk Can you omit this? I would expect a desk

- Minibar

- Music What does this mean? Radio?

- Hair dryer

- Telephone

- Satellite TV, Pay TV and radio channels

- Internet connection through phone line

Amenities:

- Medical care (by request)

- Babysitting (by request)

- Car rental (by request)

- Business center (photocopier, fax, scanner, internet) – Say something about this in the business event section

- Wireless Internet access in public areas and meeting rooms

- 24 hour currency exchange

- Credit cards (Visa, Mastercard, American Express, Eurocard, Diners Club) Omit this – or say it somewhere else when you say what payment methods are available. I’d be astonished to find out that a hotel doesn’t take credit cards.

- 150 parking spaces Say whether the parking is free

- Laundry service

- Room service: from 7.30 am to 1 pm

- Bellhop service from 7.30am to [X?] 00

- Anti-alergy room what does this mean? Hypoallergenic?

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Good luck
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Grammar Geek[Presented a magnificent panoramic façade source of natural light – I need help here. I’m not sure what you mean], the restaurant ‘O Magistrado’ is open for breakfast, lunch and dinner. The menu ranges from traditional Portuguese to international cuisine, including vegetarian offers. There’s also an excellent selection of wines. [You can’t have contemporary traditional cuisine.]
- Bellhop service from 7.30am to [X?] 00
- Anti-alergy room what does this mean? Hypoallergenic?

************

Good luck
I meant 'presented with a magnificent panoramic façade'. Is it ok?

The bellhop service is from 7.30m to midnight, should i write 00h?

I corrected the anti-alery to antiallergic room.

Thanks so much, you've been a great help.
Just say the restaurant, with its magnificent, panoramic facade, serves...

say "midnight" - it's the most clear you can be.

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