Hi,I joined a conversazione and wrote down my thought.
Can you give me some suggestions about my essay?
Thank you

The lecturer put emphasis on problem solving. He said if you solved your English problems, and you will remember it forever. I think when you got English problems and you solved them. It is true that you will remember it easily but you have to practice and review frequently.

The lecturer said that you have to choose what you need to read. You read just for epurpose of solving your problems. However, in my opinion, I think to read articles and newspapers extensively are helpful. For example, when I read an article, I will take some notes about the vocabularies which I don’t understand. It will help me memorize a wide vocabulary of English by this way. In addition, there are perhaps some quotable quotes in the articles and I will write down the sentences which will become my reference of writing. I think to read more articles will improve my English.

In writing section, the lecturer said if you want to improve your writing skills, you have to make a plan and write every single day. I agree with him. I think to write not only improving your writing skills, but also help you think.

I think there are many different ways to learning English and you should find out what kind of methods are suitable for you. However, if you want to improve your English, you must keep persevering in your efforts to learn English.
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Just the glaring errors:

The lecturer put his/her emphasis on (what's simpler: emphasized) problem solving. He said if you solved your own English problems, you
would remember how to solve them. I think when you got English
problems and you solved them, you would remember the solutionseasily but you have to practice and
review the problems frequently.

The lecturer said that you have to choose what you need to read.
You read just for the purpose of solving your problems.
However, in my opinion, I think reading articles
and newspapers extensively ishelpful. For example, when I read
an article, I will take some notes about the vocabularies which I
don't understand. It will help me memorize a wide vocabulary
of English. In addition, there are
perhaps some quotable quotes in the articles and I will write
down the sentences which will become my reference of writing. I
think reading more articles will improve my English.

In my writing section, the lecturer said if you want to
improve your writing skills, you have to *write
every single day. I agree with him. I think writing not
only improves your writing skills, but also helps
you think.

I think there are many different ways to learn English and
you should find out what kind of methods are suitable for you.
However, if you want to improve your English, you must keep
persevering in your efforts.
Thank you for your help juilelai.
Can you help me to check another alticle
Thank you very much
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Kite,

Your essay uses ideas and phrases from Adonis's post from the 20th October.

I find it unlikely that you are both in the same class with the same lecturer. Especially as Kite seems to be attending English Language Classes and you are at American High School. Do not claim to have been in a conversation when you are using someone else's written ideas.

This is coming close to plagiarism and you should not base your work on other's, even if it is not the same word for word.

If you wished to develop Adonis's ideas and essay, you should have continued to post under his original posting, not claimed it as your own.
oops it's nona again, can't get logged in from another computer.

I meant Adonis's post from 20th October.
hi nona

I didn't plagiarize Adonis's idea. He is my friend.
We joined the same conversazione.
I just wanted to practice my English, so I wrote down my opions.
I think there was a mistake!!
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Apologies.
I am a student. I have not write in english any things so plz give me easy learn style of english.

You should only tell us about the Importance of English only. In this essay you goes on other topics like about poverty etc.

Thank u

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