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Topic 3: some people think the air flight gives ordinary people more freedom. However, others think the cheap air flight should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many other problems. Discuss and give your own opinion.

In the last few years, there is an outbreak of the aviation- more and more people have a tendency to travel by air. While some travellers enjoy the comfort of the aeroplane; in my opinion, the low-priced plane should be deleted on the ground of its disadvatages that outweigh benefits.

On the one hand, it is believed that this transport gives passengers more privaty. Firstly, he serving quality of plane is much better than trains, buses and so on… As almost everyone knows, flight-attendants are always ready to give a hand when you get troubles such as if you want some special needs. Secondly, this flying transport gives you a relaxing space so that people can have a good night sleep during the long-term journey, which others can’t do. Finally, the food and drinks there are so delicious appreciating their appetite.

On the other hand, air flight also has incredible disvantages that those who go by air are ignorant. The boom of using planes as regular vehicles has results in air pollution because they emit a large amount of smoke and carbondioxide. According to some recent research, the most polluted places in Asia are reported to be Beijing’s airports and Juibai’s airports. Not only does the use of its cause air pollution but it also leads to noise pollution. Residents live near the airport have a lot of complaints about the noise when aeroplanes take off, especially at night.

In conclusion, economical airlines are really of great help to some people in providing them with convenience and freedom; however, their drawbacks can not be ignored and the government should ban these transport for the better

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leona cpu 909some people think the air flight gives ordinary people more freedom. However, others think the cheap air flight should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many other problems. Discuss and give your own opinion.

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Some people say that economy travel, especially cheap air fares,  is good because it enables people with an average income to travel.  But others argue that it is bad for the environment, and such flights should be discontinued. Discuss both views, and include your opinion.
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In the last few years, there is an outbreak of the (Outbreak is used for the start of the spread of contagious diseases. It is wrong here. ) aviation- more and more people have a tendency to travel by air. While some travellers enjoy the comfort of the aeroplane; (wrong punctuation) in my opinion, the low-priced plane (People are not buying their own personal planes.) should be deleted (wrong word) on the ground (When the plane is on the runway, and not in the air?) of its disadvatages that outweigh benefits.

On the one hand, it is believed that this transport gives passengers more privaty. (invalid word.) First, Firstly, he (wrong word.) serving quality (wrong expression - it does not make sense.) of a plane is much better than trains, buses and so on… (Never use "..." in formal writing. Do not use "etc." or phrases like "and so on". Complete the idea.) As almost everyone knows, flight-attendants (wrong punctuation) are always ready to give a hand when you get troubles (wrong form.) such as if you want have some special needs. Secondly, Second, this flying transport gives you a relaxing space so that people (Do not mix "you" and "people" in the same sentence.) can have a good night sleep during the long-term (wrong expression. "Long term" refers to many years. .) journey, which others can’t (Do not use contractions in formal writing.) do. Finally, the food and drinks there are so delicious appreciating their appetite. (wrong expression. Food does not have an appetite. People do.)

On the other hand, air flight travel ( wrong expression .) also has incredible disvantages that those who go by air are ignorant of. The boom of increase in using planes as regular vehicles has results (wrong form.) in air pollution because they emit a large amount of smoke and carbondioxide. According to some recent research, the most polluted places in Asia are reported to be Beijing’s airports and Juibai’s airports. Not only does the use of its (ungrammatical) cause air pollution but it also leads to noise pollution. Residents live near the airport have a lot of complaints (ungrammatical clause structure - there is no subject for the verb "have") about the noise when aeroplanes take off, especially at night.

In conclusion, economical airlines are really of great help to some people in providing them with convenience and freedom; however, their drawbacks can not be ignored and the government should ban these transport for the better (missing punctuation)

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