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To Whom It May Concern,

I am writing to express my interest in the doctoral program in the Market Microstructure Asset Management at Department of Risk Management, Universität Hohenheim

I am particularly keen to apply for the doctoral program in the management department as its research interests are an excellent match for my academic background. While studying for my BA in education at Qinzhou College in the China .But,,I developed a particular interest in the business administration. My master degree in management thesis, supervised by Dr Xiugang Yang, was on this topic of Relationship Among Communication Openness, Leadership-Member Exchange Relationship and Job Engagenmentt, which engendered my interest in this complex topic. After completing my master degree in management, I undertook an MSc in management at Dhurakij Pundit University in the Thailand. While studying there I was use the facebook

Know Professor Dr. Monika Gehde-Trapp, whose Business Administration, especially Risk Management to the study of Management were an inspiration to my work.

I now study PhD in management the National Institute of Development Administration in the Thailand .but , I don't want to continue to study for a Ph.D. in management at international program at the National Institute of Development Administration. And don't want to spend a long time in Thailand, I am a young girl, I don’t want to waste my youth, I want my youth to bloom in Germany. I like to go to Germany's Department of Risk Management, Universität Hohenheim for a Ph.D in management. I like the doctoral management major at this school ,and I can't imagine a better place to study this than the management at the Department of Risk Management, Universität Hohenheim. Further, I wish to work with Professor Dr. Monika Gehde-Trapp in particular, as she is a world-leading expert in the use of Market Microstructure Asset Management, and I wish to utilise the connectivity approach which she has piloted in her recent work for my project.

This research has The analysis of the microstructure of Market Microstructure has been one of the most important areas of research in finance and has allowed scholars and practitioners alike to have a much more sophisticated understanding of the dynamics of price formation in financial markets.

I am confident that I can complete the research project which I have proposed, as I already have experience in CDS , Market Microstructure

Asset Management, and in running a research project. In my master's project, I designed the experimental methodology, recruited participants, assisted with the data analysis, and contributed theoretical knowledge to the write-up. I believe that these skills and experience will allow me to complete a larger-scale project like a PhD effectively.

After completing the PhD, I plan to pursue a postdoc placement within academic Management,, likely in the area of Market Microstructure. Driven by a lifelong interest in Asset Management, I am keen to continue my education in this subject and to perform my own research which can contribute to the knowledge of the field.

Many thanks for your consideration.

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To Whom It May Concern,

I am writing to express my interest in the doctoral program in the Market Microstructure Asset Management at Department of Risk Management, Universität Hohenheim. The research focus of the department is I am particularly keen to apply for the doctoral program in the management department as its research interests are an excellent match for my academic background.

While studying for my BA in education at Qinzhou College in the China .But,,I developed a particular interest in the business administration. My master's degree in management thesis, supervised by Dr Xiugang Yang, was on this topic of Relationship Among Communication Openness, Leadership-Member Exchange Relationship and Job Engagenmentt, which engendered my interest in this complex topic. After completing my master degree in management, after which I undertook an MSc in management at Dhurakij Pundit University in the Thailand. While studying there I was use the facebook

Know Professor Dr. Monika Gehde-Trapp, whose Business Administration, especially Risk Management to the study of Management were an inspiration to my work. (This sentence is incomprehensible. Rewrite it)

I now study PhD in management the National Institute of Development Administration in the Thailand .but , I don't want to continue to study for a Ph.D. in management at international program at the National Institute of Development Administration. (Why?) And don't want to spend a long time in Thailand, I am a young girl, I don’t want to waste my youth, I want my youth to bloom in Germany. (Unprofessional) I like to go to Germany's Department of Risk Management, Universität Hohenheim for a Ph.D in management. I like the doctoral management major at this school ,and I can't imagine a better place to study this than the management at the Department of Risk Management, Universität Hohenheim. Further, I wish to work with Professor Dr. Monika Gehde-Trapp in particular, as she is a world-leading expert in the use of Market Microstructure Asset Management, and I wish to utilise the connectivity approach which she has piloted in her recent work for my project.(Did she work for your school in Thailand?)

This research has The analysis of the microstructure of Market Microstructure has been one of the most important areas of research in finance and has allowed scholars and practitioners alike to have a much more sophisticated understanding of the dynamics of price formation in financial markets.

I am confident that I can complete the research project which I have proposed, as I already have experience in CDS , Market Microstructure

Asset Management, and in running a research project. In my master's project, I designed the experimental methodology, recruited participants, assisted with the data analysis, and contributed theoretical knowledge to the write-up. I believe that my these skills and experience will allow me to complete a larger-scale project like a PhD effectively.

After completing the PhD, I plan to pursue a postdoc placement within academic Management,, likely in the area of Market Microstructure. Driven by a lifelong interest in Asset Management, I am keen to continue my education in this subject and to perform my own research which can contribute to the knowledge of the field.

Many thanks for your consideration.