Here is the draft of what i have written but i am not confident abt it.. please help me modify it..

Dear Sir,
Good Morning. This mail is regarding my leave application.
I request you to grant me leave from 1st Dec 2005 till Dec 27 2005.

Sir, as informed earlier & discussed with Mr. XYZ=t,i would like to split my leave as follows
Complementory Off - 5
Paid Leave - 14

Thanking you,
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leave office from 23 may 2013 and would be back by 28 may 2013. i will go to married for bhopal
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