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Writing task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how oil is expected in use of production of perfume

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.


The given diagram illustrated the process of making perfume by using oil.

Overall, it requires many steps to turn oil into perfume.

To begin the process, water is put into a bottle where it will be heating by fire. By heating the water, steam is produced. A tube is built to connect the bottle, which contain the heating water, and another bottle. This bottle contains aromatic plants so that when the steam pass through it, the steam will also consist of oil vapor.

Next, the mixture of the steam and the oil vapor goes through a condenser. The structure of the condenser contains one part is cold water and another apart is cold water. By passing the condenser, the steam is converted into water and form a new mixture of water and essential oil. Then, the mixture continues to be transported into a separator. Here, the separator separates essential oil and hydrolat. This is the end of the whole process with the result is the essential oil.

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nguyenmaichiThe diagram below shows how oil is expected in use of production of perfume

Where did you find this? The instructions are very very poor English. They do not make sense. Did you copy them correctly?

The diagram is also not very good for a genuine IELTS test.
Using a bad practice test to learn how to write essays is like a footballer using this kind of ball to learn how to play!

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The given (unnatural. Do not use "given' or "provided" or other such words.) diagram illustrated (wrong tense. The diagram is right in front of you now.) the process of making perfume (Incorrect reporting. There is no perfume as the final product.) by using oil. (Oil is what you use in a motor to lubricate it.)

Your writing is not good because the instructions are terrible.

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I copied it on IELTS Online tests.

I advise you not to get sample essays from that website. I have seen many sites with defective Task 1 essays.

Thank you but can you give me advice where to take IELTS WRITING question?

Please read my advice for Task 1 essays. The first post includes two sources for practice essays.

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