Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure.

What do you think are the causes of this?

What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, many students, especially undergraduates spend time for part-time jobs instead of concentrating full-time on studying. As a result, students deal with time management issues like the loss of concentration on education and also experience constant pressure. In my opinion, there are several factors that lead to this tendency and it can be resolved by various measures.
This tendency is inevitable and can be attributable to two reasons. First and foremost, many universities intend to improve the education quality hence the tuition fee increase concomitantly. Unfortunately, some students with inadequate finance are incapable of paying the fees. Moreover, occupations that are available for the student often are unqualified jobs and low-paid jobs as well, forcing them to work more. Secondly, students desiring to have activities or internships at school, find that it is useless and not practical, and finding a job would help them to gain more experiences. Indeed, instead of waiting for support from the school, the majority of students take the initiative to better their hands-on skills and their strengths.
There are two possible solutions for this trend. Firstly, the government and educational ministry can provide financial aid for students with difficult backgrounds. This assistance can be implemented bases on the academic achievement and difficulty of students. For example, many competitions have been established to give scholarships to worthy students. The second solution to be considered is allocating the budget for the activities at school.
In conclusion, the main reason why students have difficulty devoting time is the shortage of finance and could be solved by assistance. A case in point is the contests to reward the scholarship.

Long NSome students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure.What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest?

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Some students take a job while they are in university. This often results in a lack of time to study and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, many students, especially undergraduates spend time for take on a part-time job in addition to their full-time enrollment. instead of concentrating full-time on studying. As a result, students deal with time management issues like the loss of concentration (That is not a time management issue. You need to write a phrase that is relevant.) on education and also experience constant pressure. In my opinion, the primary reason is the lack of money, and the availability of more scholarships is one solution. there are several factors that lead to this tendency and it can be resolved by various measures. (That is grammatical English, but a very poor thesis statement!)


This tendency The situation where full-time students work in a job, such as taking orders in a fast-food restaurant is inevitable and can be attributed attributable to two reasons. First and foremost, many universities intend to improve the quality of their education so quality hence the tuition fees increase concomitantly. Unfortunately, some students with inadequate financial support from their families finance are incapable of paying the fees. Moreover, occupations the employment opportunities that are available for the student often are unqualified jobs and (There is no such thing as an "unqualified job." A person can be unqualified for certain jobs. I, for example, am not qualified to pull teeth.) low-paid jobs as well, forcing them to work more hours. Secondly, Second, students desiring to have activities or internships at school, find that it is useless and not practical, and finding a job would help them to gain more experiences. (wrong form) Indeed, instead of waiting for support from the school, the majority of students take the initiative to better their hands-on skills and their strengths. (incomplete sentence) by ...

There are two possible solutions for this trend. (wrong word - you have not described a trend, only a situation.) Firstly, First, the government and educational ministry can provide financial aid for students from poor families. with difficult backgrounds. This assistance can be implemented bases (wrong form) on their academic achievement and difficulty of students. (wrong phrase - Students have difficulties learning?) For example, many competitions have been established to give scholarships to worthy students. The second solution to be considered is for the family to allocate some of their budget to save for the children's education. allocating the budget for the activities at school.
In conclusion, the main reason why students have difficulty devoting time is the shortage of funds / money finance and could be solved by assistance. A case in point is the holding contests to award scholarships to needy students. reward the scholarship. (The students are rewarded, not the scholarships!)

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