Despite the benefits for health, fewer people today than ever before exercise by walking. Why is this? What can be done to encourage more walking?

In ancient times, the fundamental principle to keep fit and being healthy is doing physical exercises regularly. Not only doing exercise help building up a good shape and physique, but it also improves blood circulation which betters our productivity. Walking is considered as a vital part of physical exercises. However, For the past few years, people barely strolling or quit it completely. This essay will analyze the reason for it and some useful approaches to encourage walking.
There are some reasons people lost interest in walking but primarily due to the desperate shortage of infrastructure. The growth in the quantity of buildings means the concomitant reduction of pedestrian areas. Secondly, the younger is too into studying while adults are occupied with their responsibility to achieve goals or promotions. Therefore, walking is a wastage of time for them and spending time working is more worthy. In addition, population or criminal issues are also obstacles for the individual to have a running.
In order to develop the interest in walking, there are some practical solutions such as diffusing the benefits of walking. Some schools in Australia apply strolling as a lesson in Physical Education and it directly creates a habit for students. Besides that, the government should make a strategy to harmonize the number of buildings and walking areas. Moreover, eradicating the contamination and crime rate also needs to be prioritized.
In conclusion, the individual ought to fully aware of the merits of walking and the government has essential responsibility to resolve the problem.

You barely wrote the minimum number of words. Try to write about 270 words, not 250.




In ancient times, (Do you mean 5000 years ago? That really makes no sense. In those days, people did not have cars, bikes, busses or trains - they had to walk everywhere all the time.) the fundamental principle to keep fit and being healthy is (For "ancient times" you need a past tense verb.) doing physical exercises regularly. Not only doing exercise help building (Ungrammatical word order) Doing exercise not only helps keep us in shape up a good shape and physique, but it also improves blood circulation which betters our productivity. Walking is considered as a vital part of physical exercises. However, For (The word is not the first one in the sentence. Do not capitalize it.) the past few years, people barely strolling (wrong form, wrong word) or quit it completely. This essay will analyze the reason for it and some useful approaches to encourage walking.

Most of your paragraph was off-topic. The topic is not about the health benefits of walking. It is about the decrease in this kind of exercise.

Never mention your essay. Answer the essay prompts: 1) Why do people not walk for exercise?. 2) What can be done about this?

For example:

People will go to a gym for exercise, but they will not walk a short distance when they can take a car, mainly because they are in a hurry. However, there are some ways to raise awareness of the benefits of walking and encourage more of this healthy activity.


There are some reasons people lost interest in walking but primarily due to the desperate shortage of infrastructure. (That makes no sense at all.) The growth in the quantity (wrong word) of buildings means the concomitant reduction of pedestrian areas. Secondly, the younger (wrong word) is too into studying while adults are occupied with their responsibility to achieve goals or promotions. Therefore, walking is a waste wastage of time for them and spending time working is more worthy. In addition, population or criminal issues are also obstacles for the individual to have a running. (That makes no sense at all.)
In order to develop the interest in walking, there are some practical solutions such as diffusing (wrong word) the benefits of walking. Some schools in Australia apply strolling (wrong word) as a lesson in Physical Education and it directly creates a habit for students. Besides that, the government should make a strategy to harmonize the number of buildings (That makes no sense at all.) and walking areas. Moreover, eradicating the contamination (That makes no sense at all.) and crime rate also needs to be prioritized. (You do not write logical reasons. I barely can understand it. )


In conclusion, the individual ought to be made fully aware of the merits of walking and the government has essential responsibility to resolve the problem.