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Topic: Effects of smart devices on our daily lives

Smart devices play an important role in our daily lives, which brings numerous benefits to us but also contains several drawbacks.

Generally, smart devices will certainly bring about a myriad of advantages. First of all, they have considered the quickest means of communication in today’s society. Unlike previous life when people communicate with each other by making use of pigeons or post office for letter delivery, the modern devices allow people to contact easily with our friends or relatives wherever by calling or sending messages in a short time. For example, only with a mobile phone, a simple object in our pocket, we can be able to reach our family and friends around the world in about 10 seconds. With the assistance of smart devices, the educational backgrounds also significantly make improvements. This is because smart devices often connect to the Internet containing useful information sources such as study material, and texts of higher institutions. This will make smart devices perfect for learning and self-education. On the other hand, a lot of negative effects of smart devices like laptops, automobiles are also there in many aspects. To begin with, along with their fastest speed, they have caused people to become more impersonal with each other. People will only focus on their work on those smart devices rather than face-to-face interaction by presenting in some events such as on the bus, in the par. We can take the use of laptops as an example. People just do work at home and then send them via email without going to the company, which results in ineffective work because of the lack of direct interaction. In addition, as for the consumption of smart devices, it also leads to health problems, especially physical health. To put more specific, our backs and eyes are affected by the use of high-tech equipment, namely myopic, backache, migraines.

In conclusion, although smart devices are indispensable in our lives, they still possess both advantages and disadvantages effects.

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Smart devices play an important role in our daily lives, and bring which brings numerous benefits to us but also while truly they contain several drawbacks.

I think that which should not be used in here. It is not clear to indicate which is what. If it is "smart devices", the verb "brings" should be "bring"

The next part of this sentence is telling a contradictory idea so, I suggest we use while instead of "but also".

Generally, smart devices will certainly bring about a myriad of advantages.

bring is duplicated.

Generally, smart devices provide several utility functions for our life to become more comfortable.

First of all, they have been considered the quickest means of communication in today’s society.

Quickest here is not good, how can we confirm that is quickest.

First, they are dominant in communications to quickly connect to others via not only telecommunications but also social media channels.

Unlike previous life when people communicate with each other by making use of pigeons or post office for letter delivery. The modern Modern devices now allow people to contact easily with to our their friends or relatives wherever by calling or sending messages in a short time.

Modern devices now can enable many connections to others such as chat, messengers, video calls which are much more simple, rapid, and convenient than before.

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blueskysgSmart devices play an important role in our daily lives, and bring which brings numerous benefits to us but also while truly they contain several drawbacks.I think that which should not be used in here. It is not clear to indicate which is what. If it is "smart devices", the verb "brings" should be "bring"

The original sentence is fine. The dependent clause refers to "playing a role" not to the devices.

Truly is not a beneficial addition.

blueskysgGenerally, smart devices provide several utility functions for our life to become more comfortable.

That is not what the poster intended and the sentence is somewhat awkward and unnatural.

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Topic: Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of smart devices in our daily lives

Smart devices play an important role in our daily lives, which brings numerous benefits to us but also contains several drawbacks.

Generally, smart devices will certainly bring about a myriad of advantages. First of all, they have considered the quickest means of communication in today’s society. Unlike previous life when people communicate with each other by making use of pigeons or post office for letter delivery, the modern devices allow people to contact easily with our friends or relatives wherever by calling or sending messages in a short time. For example, only with a mobile phone, a simple object in our pocket, we can be able to reach our family and friends around the world in about 10 seconds. With the assistance of smart devices, the educational backgrounds also significantly make improvements. This is because smart devices often connect to the Internet containing useful information sources such as study material, and texts of higher institutions. This will make smart devices perfect for learning and self-education.

On the other hand, a lot of negative effects of smart devices like laptops, automobiles are also there in many aspects. To begin with, along with their fastest speed, they have caused people to become more impersonal with each other. People will only focus on their work on those smart devices rather than face-to-face interaction by presenting in some events such as on the bus, in the par. We can take the use of laptops as an example. People just do work at home and then send them via email without going to the company, which results in ineffective work because of the lack of direct interaction. In addition, as for the consumption of smart devices, it also leads to health problems, especially physical health. To put more specific, our backs and eyes are affected by the use of high-tech equipment, namely myopic, backache, migraines.

In conclusion, although smart devices are indispensable in our lives, they still possess both advantages and disadvantages effects.

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Sorry for not following the instructions properly. I have just edited it.

Smart devices play an important role in our daily lives, which brings numerous benefits to us but there are also contains several drawbacks.

Generally, smart devices will certainly bring with them about many a myriad of advantages. First of all, they have considered (wrong verb form. Devices do not think or consider anything.) the quickest means of communication in today’s society. Unlike fifty years ago previous life (A previous life invokes the belief of reincarnation.) when people communicate (wrong verb tense. ) with each other by making use of pigeons or the postal service post office for letter delivery, these modern devices allow people to contact easily with our their friends or relatives wherever by calling or sending electronic messages in a short time. For example, only with a mobile phone, a simple object in our pocket, we can be able (wrong verb - use either can or able - the two do not go together.. ) to reach our family and friends around the world in about 10 seconds. With the assistance of smart devices, the educational backgrounds (That makes no sense.) also significantly make improvements. This is because smart devices often connect to the Internet containing useful information sources such as study material, and texts of higher institutions. This will make smart devices perfect for learning and self-education.

On the other hand, there are a lot of negative effects from using of smart devices like laptops, automobiles An automobile is not a smart device.) are also there in many aspects. To begin with, along with their fastest speed, (I do not understand. Are you talking about race cars?) they have caused people to become more isolated from impersonal with each other. People will only focus on their work on those smart devices rather than having a nice conversation face-to-face interaction by presenting in some events (That makes no sense.) such as on the bus, in the par. (wrong word, missing conjunction.) We can take the use of laptops as an example. People just do work at home and then send them (Do they send the laptop? The only plural antecedent for "them" is "laptops".) via email without going to the office company, which results in ineffective work because of the lack of direct interaction. In addition, as for the consumption of smart devices, (Do people eat these devices? And does that give them indigestion?) it also leads to health problems, especially physical health. (Health is physical...) To put be more specific, our backs and eyes are affected by the use of high-tech equipment, namely myopic, backache, migraines. ( missing conjunction. Those things are not high-tech equipment. )

In conclusion, although smart devices are indispensable in our lives, they still have possess both advantages and disadvantages effects.


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