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Can someone help me check the grammar of this email , Is it correct (or not)?

Dear sir,

Please see the attached XYZ department payment bank receipt. They have paid 1000$ USD ( one thousand dollars only)
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I would say:
Please see the attached payment bank receipt from the XYZ department. They have only paid USD 1,000.
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Dear sir, I’m recommending pay for 1000 rupee to Nimal Wijesuriya