I have posted a post before but I couldn't find how to edit or delete it so I decided to create new one. So sorry for that inconvenient.

In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.

What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question?


Nowadays, more and more people are attracted to the history behind their house or building. This essay will discuss why this phenomenon arises, why these people are so interested in it and how they find out about that hidden story.


First of all, for the residents, security is one of the most crucial aspects that they must consider before buying or renting a new home. Thus, these people tend to carefully dig into the situation of their place, and obviously they won’t skip the past of that architecture. To clarify, the exploring helps them to know whether this house or building happened any frightened events like suicide, murder, social evils,... or so on. Secondly, there are some people figuring out about the history of their house only due to curiosity. They just want to understand more about where they live, and especially with who isn’t the local, that will be a good chance to develop the understanding about the culture and tradition around them. How boring it is if we live in a place where we know nothing happens outside at all?


But how can we investigate this question? The easiest way to find the answer is asking and talking with the neighbors nearby. They will give us abundant pieces of little things in our area, sometimes including the history from the very first day of the house or building. Additionally, we can research more information online or through the records of press, papers, magazines,... or even through the local authorities. There are many ways to unveil the past of our place, especially in this era where everything appears on the Internet.


To sum up, researching about our house or building plays an important part for the residents before and while deciding to live there. It helps us not only detect the potential risk but also truly understand the place if we really want to locate in that house for a long time.


Nowadays, more and more people are attracted to the history behind their house or building. This essay will discuss why this phenomenon arises, why these people are so interested in it and how they find out about that hidden story. (Phenomenon is used incorrectly.)

Do not just copy the essay topic. Present your thesis, - your main points - instead.

e.g.

People are naturally curious about what events might have taken place there in the past and there are many resources they can use to uncover any secrets or mysteries.



First of all, for the residents, security is one of the most crucial aspects that they must consider before buying or renting a new home. (That is not part of the topic. The topic is about the place where they are living, not a future purchase. ) Thus, these people tend to carefully dig into the situation of their place, and obviously they won’t (Do not use contractions in formal writing.) skip the past of that architecture. (That does not make sense. "Architecture" is not used correctly.) To clarify, the exploring helps them to know whether this house or building happened any frightened events like suicide, murder, social evils,... or so on. (Do not use ellipses - ... - in formal writing.) Secondly, there are some people figuring out about the history of their house only due to curiosity. They just want to understand more about where they live, and especially with who isn’t (Do not use contractions in formal writing.) the local, (Incorrect usage. I do not know what you mean.) that will be a good chance to develop the an understanding about the culture and tradition around them. How boring it is if we live in a place where we know nothing happens outside at all?

(incorrect punctuation - You wrote a statement, not a question.)

But how can we investigate this question? The easiest way to find the answer is asking and talking with the neighbors nearby. They will give us abundant pieces of little things interesting tidbits in our area, sometimes including the history from the very first day of the house or building. Additionally, we can research more information online or through the records of press, papers, magazines,... (Do not use ellipses - ... - in formal writing.) or even through the local authorities. There are many ways to unveil the past of our place, especially in this era where everything appears on the Internet.


To sum up, researching the history of about our house or building plays an important part for the residents before and while deciding to live there. (off-topic) It helps us not only detect the potential risk but also truly understand the place if we really want to locate in that house for a long time.

You wrote about 320 words. It is a bit too long. The minimum is 250. )

Thank you a lot. That's the first time I've written an Ielts writing test so I was confused a lot about it's form and structure. Now I've already knew where I was wrong :>>>