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China's economic dependence on external high level of dependence on foreign trade out a double-edged sword, no country in export growth was led to the rapid economic growth should be recognized that there are enormous risks. In order to mitigate fluctuations in the international economy may impact China's economy should be the stability of China's foreign trade dependence. At present, the primary task is to actively expand domestic demand and reduce dependence on foreign markets, to stimulate domestic consumption, expanding domestic demand, improving people's livelihood and promote the development of domestic economy. The main measures mentioned in this article is to raise the income of the farmers and improve the social security system, farmers
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Jameshe:

In your first 2 sentences, I cannot make out a main clause with a coherent subject and verb. It is all a jumble of words and phrases.

Please improve your paragraph first by writing very simple and short sentences with one subject and one verb in each sentence.

This wil result in writing that is choppy, but at least it will be comprehensible. You can then combine the short sentences into longer ones.

China's economic dependence

on external high level of dependence (How can you have a dependence on dependence?)

on foreign trade

out a double-edged sword, (Where is the verb? Do you mean to begin a new sentence here?)

no country in export growth was led (verb) to the rapid economic growth should be recognized (another verb, but it has no subject)

that

there are enormous risks. (this clause is OK - write more main clauses like this)

In order to mitigate fluctuations in the international economy (prepositional phrase)

may impact (this verb has no subject)

China's economy

should be (this verb has no subject)

the stability of China's foreign trade dependence.