Hello,

I am writing a reasearch paper on The Causes of Income Inequality and I need help with my thesis statement. This is what I have:

Although Income gaps are getting smaller, there are reasons why income inequality still exists in our society.

Please let me know if I am on the right track .Thanks in Advance

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Hello,

I am writing a reasearch paper on The Causes of Income Inequality and I need help with my thesis statement. This is what I have:

Although Income gaps are getting smaller, there are reasons why income inequality still exists in our society.

Please let me know if I am on the right track .Thanks in Advance

A thesis statement should contain the answer to the question that your paper will elaborate on. It should also be very precise.

Maybe try something like this.

"Income equality still exists in (change our society to something specific) due to...."

Your current thesis has two different topics. "Income gaps are getting smaller" and "Income inequality still exists in our society."

I would start out with a strong statement about what causes income inequality, and I would specify the "society". (You have to assume that the reader knows nothing.)

Also remember a thesis can be more than one sentence.
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Ok How is this :



Income Inequality still exsits in America due to low federal minimum wage, racial and gender discrimination, education and Technologial Advancements.



I am have such a hard time with my thesis statement and intro, thats why I choose to work on them last...it so much easier
Yes, the thesis usually develops as the paper develops. I think this thesis is better than your previous one. But I hope someone else comments. I'm not an expert...
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You have to specify what reasons income inequality exist. For example, income inequality exist because politics favor the rich.