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Hi. Can someone please tell me if this is correct or if you would say it in a different way? And how is the punctuation?

Have you talked to someone about it, someone maybe a little more qualified than me, because I have no experience with this whatsoever?

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I'd change it just a little, but that's just my opinion. Others may have other ideas. Different style manuals also probably give varying advice, although this seems to be written in a style so informal that most style manuals would not even have any advice on it. The more informal your style, the more you can make the punctuation personal to your own tastes.

Have you talked to someone about it? — someone who might be a little more qualified than me? — because I have no experience with it whatsoever.

CJ