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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person or musician.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.c

There are some people were believed to born with special talents in sport or music fields. Whereas, people who do not have talents can be taught to become an athlete or musician when they were young. While I accept that there are a number of talented people in that field, I would argue that children can be taught to be a well-known musician or a great athlete in the world.

On the one hand, there are several reasons why they were believed a prodigy person in that situation. One reason is that they are almost perfect when they do their job. They can do much better than any others at the same age or even someone who is older suprising many people. This is because of the gene inside them which is from their mother and father having been in that field. For example, Evan Le is a child who is called a genius in music. He can play a Betthoven song in piano with an impressive performance which is completely professional. He only just at the age of 5. As a result, he makes everyone look at him admiringly and becomes well-known in every part of the world.

On the other hand, I believe that any child can be fully educated to become a good sports or musician. Firstly, children can be easily taught when they were young. Their teachers push their imagination, convey every enthusiasm to their students and find out the way to access a world of knowledge. If youngsters learn from the enthusiasm of their teachers, they will draw inspiration of this path. Moreover, children seem to be influenced on the older generations. They will act and try hard to become a good sports or musian as their idols. As a result, they can achieve after a difficult long process to become an athlete or singer they want.

in conclusion, although both people with talents and people were teached to become a good sport when they were in their childhood are seem to be believed in contrast, it seems to me that I do believe in children can be an athlete or musician in some days.

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Your English is good, but it needs some more practice. Also, do not claim old scientific theories that are not valid to be true.


There are some people were believed to born (Ungrammatical verb usage. The infinitive is "to bear", but that is incorrect in this sentence. ) with special talents in sport or music fields. Whereas, people who do not have talents can be taught to become an athlete or musician when they were (wrong tense.) young. While I accept that there are a number of talented people in that field, (which one? Music or sports?) I would argue that children can be taught to be a well-known musician or a great athlete in the world.

On the one hand, there are several reasons why they (Who? there is no antecedent for this pronoun.) were believed (missing words) a prodigy person (Prodigy is a noun. "Prodigy person" is an incorrect phrase. ) in that situation. (What situation are you talking about? You need an antecedent for the pronoun "that".) One reason is that they are almost perfect when they do their job. (What job are you talking about?) They can do much better than any others at the same age or even someone who is older (missing punctuation) suprising many people. This is because of the gene inside them (Incorrect usage) which is from their mother and father having been in that field. (??) For example, (Evan Le's Vietnamese American parents do not have any musical background. You cannot use this example of inheriting some "Genius" DNA. That is Lamarckism , an old theory, which has been scientifically disproven. ) is a child who is called a genius in music. He can play a Betthoven song in piano with an impressive performance which is completely professional. He only just at the age of 5. (Unnatural English) As a result, he makes everyone look at him admiringly and becomes (wrong tense) well-known in every part of the world.

On the other hand, I believe that any child (most children. Be careful of using unqualified expressions.) can be fully educated to become a good sports (wrong word. "a good sport" is a person who does not get angry when he loses.) or musician. Firstly, First, (Use first, second, third and fourth in enumerations. Also, do not use enumeration words unless you have at least 2 points to make.) children can be easily taught when they were (wrong tense.) young. Their teachers push their imagination, convey every enthusiasm to their students and find out the way to access a world of knowledge (Playing the piano or football requires physical prowess much more than knowledge or imagination.) . If youngsters (use students or pupils) learn from the enthusiasm of their teachers, they will draw inspiration of this path. (wrong phrase.) Moreover, children seem to be influenced on (wrong word.) the older generations. They will act and try hard to become a good sports (wrong word.) or musian (wrong word) as (wrong word) their idols. As a result, they can achieve after a difficult long process to become an athlete or singer they want.(wrong usage)

in conclusion, although both people with talents and people were teached to become a good sport when they were in their childhood are seem to be believed (Ungrammatical) in contrast, it seems to me that I do believe in (wrong word) children can be an athlete or musician in some days. (wrong phrase. Does it take only 5 days to be an athlete or professional musician?)

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person or musician.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are some people were believed to born with special talents in sport or music fields. Whereas, people who do not have talents can be taught to become an athlete or musician when they were young. While I accept that there are a number of talented people in that field, I would argue that children can be taught to be a well-known musician or a great athlete in the world.

On the one hand, there are several reasons why they were believed a prodigy person in that situation. One reason is that they are almost perfect when they do their job. They can do much better than any others at the same age or even someone who is older suprising many people. This is because of the gene inside them which is from their mother and father having been in that field. For example, Evan Le is a child who is called a genius in music. He can play a Betthoven song in piano with an impressive performance which is completely professional. He only just at the age of 5. As a result, he makes everyone look at him admiringly and becomes well-known in every part of the world.

On the other hand, I believe that any child can be fully educated to become a good sports or musician. Firstly, children can be easily taught when they were young. Their teachers push their imagination, convey every enthusiasm to their students and find out the way to access a world of knowledge. If youngsters learn from the enthusiasm of their teachers, they will draw inspiration of this path. Moreover, children seem to be influenced on the older generations. They will act and try hard to become a good sports or musian as their idols. As a result, they can achieve after a difficult long process to become an athlete or singer they want.

in conclusion, although both people with talents and people were teached to become a good sport when they were in their childhood are seem to be believed in contrast, it seems to me that I do believe in children can be an athlete or musician in some days.

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There are some people were believed to born => " There are some people are born with talents in sport or music field "

"when they were (wrong tense.) young." Why is wrong tense ?

"were believed (missing words) a prodigy " => " were believed as prodigy "

"They can do much better than any others at the same age or even someone who is older (missing punctuation) suprising many people." => " They can do much better than any others at the same age or even someone who is older. And that also surprise many people. "

" This is because of the gene inside them (Incorrect usage) which is from their mother and father having been in that field. (??) " => " this is because they inherited talents from their mother or father. "

"play a song in piano =>" play a song on piano "

" He only just at the age of 5." => "He is only 5 years old "

" they will draw inspiration of this path. (wrong phrase.) " => ' they will draw inspiration from this path "


" when they were in their childhood are seem to be believed (Ungrammatical) " can you help me correct it?

thank you so much, teacher !

Hương ĐàoThere are some people were believed to born => " There are some people are born with talents in sport or music field "

There are some people are born with talents in sports or music. field

There are some people who are believed to be born with special talents in sports or music.

The most natural English:

There are some people who are born (to be) athletes or musicians.
Some people are just natural athletes or musicians.

Hương Đào"when they were (wrong tense.) young." Why is wrong tense ?

You need the present tense.

But people who are not born with these talents can be taught to become an athlete or musician when they are young. 

Use the past tense if it a person who is already grown up and you are talking about the past:

Hoang is 16 years old. He started taking piano lessons when he was five years old. He plays the piano very well. 
Hương Đào"were believed (missing words) a prodigy " => " were believed as prodigy "

On the one hand, there are several reasons why the greatest musicians and athletes (Plural subject) are (plural verb) believed to have been child prodigies. (plural predicate)

Hương Đào"They can do much better than any others at the same age or even someone who is older (missing punctuation) suprising many people."

They can do much better than any others at the same age or even someone who is older, which surprises many people.

Hương Đàothis is because they inherited talents from their mother or father. "

This is because they inherited these talents from their mother or father.

This is good English, but it is not scientifically valid. According to geneticists, qualities such as talents and high intelligence are not heritable.

Hương Đào"play a song in piano =>" play a song on piano "

He can play a Beethoven sonata on the piano as well as a professional.

song = music that people sing
sonata = music that is played on one instrument.

Hương Đào" He only just at the age of 5." => "He is only 5 years old "

good

Hương Đào" they will draw inspiration of this path. (wrong phrase.) " => ' they will draw inspiration from this path "

If students have enthusiastic teachers, they be inspired by them.

Hương Đào when they were in their childhood are seem to be believed (Ungrammatical) "

This is your writing:

in conclusion, although both people with talents and people were teached to become a good sport when they were in their childhood are seem to be believed in contrast, it seems to me that I do believe in children can be an athlete or musician in some days.

This is good English.

In conclusion, because both people born with natural talents and people taught to become good athletes when they were in their childhood can play professional sports, I do believe that any child can be an great athlete or musician if they work hard.

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