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Hello friends.

Can you correct my mistakes ???

I am going to go to America this summer for Work & Travel but I am speaking a little English.

My English level yet elementary but I will Intermediate level after 5 months.

Now !!! I need your help.

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Dear my teacher. You know. I'm Die & Mold Designer. Your family's job.

if you talk your family for me. I want working your family's company for to be under training ( 20 days )

- or internship - I'm sorry I don't now Emotion: sad

I know. I speak a little English but I will speak better English because My English teacher very much teach. We are very lucky students.

I used CNC Wire Erosion Machine 3 years.

I used CNC Milling Machine 6 months . I using very good of Universal Milling, Turning and Drilling

I have a good knowledge of SolidWorks and AutoCAD

I have a good knowledge Die Cutting Design.

I want to learn your family's company address.

Thank you very much for you were help me...
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You need to learn how to use full stops/periods correctly. Only use them at the end of a sentence.

Dear my teacher.

You know that I'm a Die & Mold Designer, which is the industry your family is involved in.

I wondered if you would talk to your family for me as I would like to do a 20-day internship at your family's company.

I know I only speak a little English at the moment but I will improve as my English teacher is very good. We are very lucky students.

I used a CNC Wire Erosion Machine for 3 years.

I used a CNC Milling Machine for 6 months. I am skilled at Universal Milling, Turning and Drilling.

I have a good knowledge of SolidWorks and AutoCAD.

I have a good knowledge Die Cutting Design.

I would like to learn your family's company address.
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Uh... aren't there a few mistakes in the text?