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Hi,

Can you please read this long sentence and help me make it better? Do words in blue fit the context?

In the end, if the opposing party persists in using pressures, unreliable information and feeble arguments, these techniques can be discredited even publicly, but always by preserving the reputation and integrity of the negotiator and by giving a new chance for turning negotiation into/changing the direction of negotiations into collaborative atmosphere.

Thank you very much
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My effort:

In the end, if the opposing party persists in using pressure, unreliable information or feeble argument, then these techniques can be discredited, even publicly, yet in a way that preserves the reputation and integrity of the negotiator and offers an opportunity to turn the atmosphere of negotiation in a collaborative direction.
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Thank you Mister Micawber. You are the last man standingindeed. When everybody else give up, I know I can count on you. Emotion: smile