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Are the following sentences acceptable?

(1) Several years ago the government changed the law permitting private company to start the business of weather prediction.

(2) The private company help people to make plans for specific occasions by weather forecast and deciding the date to hold activities.
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contiluoAre the following sentences acceptable?

(1) Several years ago the government changed the law permitting private company to start the business of weather prediction.
(2) The private company help people to make plans for specific occasions by weather forecast and deciding the date to hold activities.
Several years ago, the government changed the law to permit private companies to offer weather prediction services. These companies offer forecasts that help people make plans and decisions about their activities.

If you "plan for an occasion" you generally do it far enough in advance that a weather prediction won't help you. Deciding whether you hold your event indoors or outdoors make take place a few days in advance and a forecast will help with that.
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Is there one specific private company, or can any private company do this?
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It should be any private company.
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