The wave struck the shore as if there were monstrous witches hovering toward the shore. A fast-paced train—with its carriage was clinging like a daisy chain—passing through the wave. The wave hit the train drastically. In the heat of the moment, the wave turned into a fire, burning the whole town. The plaintive, raucous noise of screaming echoed across the town.
Jack—a black, tall lanky man was sauntering there—saw a monstrous flammy, flown fire dancing on top of the roof—which was his house. His black face turned red as if the coal was burning with an extreme temperature. Jack got angry, He went into the fire, beating it with his fists. The fire didn't hurt but burned him instead. A marvelous bob-haired women hovered as if she was a superman grabbed a sprinkler from the garden in front of Jack's house and sparged the fire. With a blast of water spurting out. The fire disappeared.

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The wave struck the shore as if there were monstrous witches hovering toward (If you hover, you do not change position at all. ) the shore. A fast-moving paced train—with its carriage (A train with one carriage?) was (ungrammatical) clinging like a daisy chain—passing (ungrammatical) through the wave. The wave hit the train drastically. (wrong word - violently, with a sickening crash) In an instant the heat of the moment, the wave turned into a fire, burning the whole town. The plaintive, raucous noise of screaming horrific / chilling / eerie sound of screams echoed across the town.
Jack—a black, tall lanky black man was sauntering there—saw (ungrammatical) a monstrous flammy, flown fire dancing on top of the roof—which was of his house. (a roof is not a house) His black face turned red as if the coal (??) was burning with an extreme temperature. Jack got angry, (comma splice error) He went into the fire, beating it with his fists. The fire didn't hurt but burned him (Usually burns cause pain...) instead. A marvelous bob-haired women hovered as if she was a superman grabbed a sprinkler (ungrammatical) from the garden in front of Jack's house and sparged (??) the fire. With a blast of water spurting out. (ungrammatical) The fire disappeared.

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The wave struck the shore as if there were monstrous witches flying toward the shore. A fast-moving train—with its carriages were clinging like a daisy chain—passed through the wave. The wave hit the rain violently. In an instant, the wave turned into a fire, burning the whole town. The horrific, eerie sound of screams echoed across the town.
Jack—a tall lanky black man was sauntering there—seeing a monstrous fire dancing on top of the roof of his house. His black face turned red as if something turned red as it was burning at an extreme temperature. Jack got angry. He went into the fire, beating it with his fists. The fire didn't hurt but burned him plainfully. A marvelous bob-haired women hovered as if she was a superman. She grabbed a sprinkler from the garden in front of Jack's house and extinguished the fire. With a blast of water spurting out of the sprinkler. The fire disappeared.

The wave struck the shore as if there were monstrous witches flying in it, driving it. toward the shore. A fast-moving train—with its carriages were clinging together like a daisy chain—passed through the wave. The wave struck hit the rain violently. In an instant, the wave turned into a fire, consuming / engulfing burning the whole town. The horrific, eerie sound of screams echoed across the town.
Jack—a tall lanky black man was sauntering there and saw seeing a monstrous fire dancing on top of the roof of his house. His black face turned red as if something turned red as it were burning like a hot coal. at an extreme temperature. Jack got angry. He went into the fire, beating it with his fists. The fire didn't hurt but burned him plainfully. (??) A marvelous magical mysterious bob-haired women hovered above the curtain of fire. as if she were was a superman. She grabbed a sprinkler from the garden in front of Jack's house and extinguished the fire. With a blast of water spurting out of the sprinkler, the . The fire disappeared.

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The wave struck the shore as if there were monstrous witches flying in it, driving it. A fast-moving train—with its carriages clinging together like a daisy chain—passed through the wave. The wave struck violently. In an instant, the wave turned into a fire, engulfing the whole town. The horrific, eerie sound of screams echoed across the town.
Jack—a tall lanky black man— was sauntering there and saw a monstrous fire dancing on top of the roof of his house. His black face turned red as if it were burning like a hot coal. Jack got angry. He went into the fire, beating it with his fists. The fire didn't hurt but burned him. A magical mysterious bob-haired women hovered above the curtain of fire. as if she were a superman. She grabbed a sprinkler from the garden in front of Jack's house and extinguished the fire. With a blast of water spurting out of the sprinkler, the fire disappeared.

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