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Please note that 20% special customer discount we offer is only applicable for tarriff rates .Since rates for monthly publication is already discounted rates therefore we cannot provide 20% discount for monthly publication of advertisements.However you being one of our valuable customer we can always negotiate the price.I have discussed about your request for processing the publication of the advert with previous rate and i am glad to inform you that our management has agreed to give you 20% discount on this month
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Please note that 20% special customer discount we offer is only applicable for tarriff rates .Since rates for monthly publication is already discounted, we cannot provide 20% discount for monthly publication of advertisements. However, you being a valued customer, we can always negotiate the price. I have discussed about your request for processing the publication of the advert with previous rate and i am glad to inform you that our management has agreed to give you 20% discount on this month
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Please note that 20% special customer discount we offer is only applicable to daily advertisements in tarriff rates .Since monthly package rates are already discounted rates.we cannot offer 20% discount.However you being a valued customer.we can always negotiate the price.Hence I am pleased to inform you that we are offering 20% discount this time,but normal monthly package rates will be charged as of month of may

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Please note that the 20% special customer discount we offer is only applicable to daily advertisements in tarriff (check spelling) rates. Since monthly package rates are already discounted rates, we cannot offer the 20% discount. However, you being a valued customer, I am pleased to inform you that we are offering a 20% discount this time, but normal monthly package rates will be charged as of May.
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