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Can some or english teacher check my essay for me? It won't let me attach my essay onto files. So I'm going to copy and paste it here. For get the other post subject which is check my essay for me because I forget to copy and paste and attch my essay.

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I am from Saigon, Vietnam. But I have lived in the United State of America for 13 years. I live in north Saint Petersburg, Florida. So, technically my hometown is here in the United State of America in Saint Petersburg, Florida not in Vietnam. I am going to compare and contrast my two places. And there are my birth place which is Vietnam and also my long living life place which is America. The reason why I called America my long living life is because I have been lived here for a long time and I do not want to go back to Vietnam. In my writing I am going to explain about my birth place and long living life place. In American and Vietnam the languages are different. Because in American people speak English and in Vietnam people speak Vietnamese. Saint Petersburg is a city in Pinellas County, Florida in the United States. In Florida and Vietnam, both have markets for people to go groceries. In Florida, there are many Asian market stores. There are many different kind schools in Florida and Vietnam such as elementary, middle and high school and also colleges for kids to go to learn. In Florida and Vietnam have school for adult to go to learn, such as College. But in Vietnam not many adults want to go to school. In Florida and Vietnam have many beautiful hotels for people to come with their family during breaks such as Christmas, summer and etc to relax and enjoy their breaks. In Vietnam and Florida, there also have different kind mall for people to go to shop. In Florida and Vietnam, have many different cities. For example, Tampa, Orlando, Miami, and Saint Petersburg are cities in Florida. In Vietnam, Saigon, Hanoi, hue, Vinh, Can Tho, dalat, danang, are cities. Hanoi is the capital of Vietnam and Tallahassee is the capital of Florida. Florida is known for the Sunshine State. And also Florida is the state of oranges. There are a lot of immigrant people that come from many countries to come Florida to have a better lives, jobs, freedoms and education. In Vietnam, American people come to Vietnam to ambassador. In Florida and Vietnam, every year the economic are changing. There are also hurricane and thunderstorm going on in Florida and Vietnam. There is much different racism such as yellow, brown, black, and white skin in Florida than in Vietnam. In Vietnam, there is not a lot of racism than in Florida. People in Florida get along and make friend easily, and some are kind, and respect each other. In Florida and Vietnam, kids and teenager are friendly. But sometimes they get in fight or argument and trouble in school by their teacher. Both countries in middle and high school, when ever students are bad or disrespect to their teachers, they get referral or suspended and chances. Florida and Vietnam Kids in high school are officially called teenagers. In Florida, when you are 16 year old you get learner permit and 18 year old official license to be able to drive motor vehicles. In Vietnam, when you are 18 you get official license to drive motor scooter. Both in Florida and Vietnam, when you drive you need to have insurance. In Florida and Vietnam, people also open restaurant to make businesses. In Florida, when people open a restaurant, they need to have degree and have to be certain age to be able to open a restaurant, but in Vietnam you don't need any degree and 18 year old can open a restaurant, don't have to be certain age to open a restaurant. In Florida, people ride motor vehicles. And in Vietnam people ride motor scooter. Vietnam is a poor country. But America is not a poor country because you can find jobs easily. In Vietnam, the people work very hard to gain money and support their family. In America and Vietnam, there is different variety type of foods. But the foods in Vietnam are not healthy then in America because in Vietnam all food contain with msg. That's all I know and can compare and contrast between my two places: my birth place and my long living life place.

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