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Today the share market clocked 6% growth, up by 900 points, it’s the second highest growth, the previous was in Jan 2008, when market surged by 5%. Experts had attributed this growth to the high inflow of investment by foreign investors. In the coming days, sustainability of the market depends on the roller coaster ride of the globe market.
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Hi,

Today the share market clocked 6% growth, up by 900 points, it’s the second highest growth, the previous was in Jan 2008, when market surged by 5%. Experts had attributed this growth to the high inflow of investment by foreign investors. In the coming days, sustainability of the market depends on the roller coaster ride of the globe market.

Today the share market clocked 6% growth, up by 900 points. It’s the second highest growth. The previous highest was in Jan 2008, when the market surged by 5%. Experts have attributed this growth to the high inflow of foreign investment. In the coming days, sustainability of the market depends on the roller-coaster ride of the globe market.

Be careful with run-on sentences.Emotion: smile

Best wishes, Clive
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CreativeguruToday the share market clocked 6% growth, up by 900 points, it’s the second highest growth, the previous was in Jan 2008, when market surged by 5%. Experts had attributed this growth to the high inflow of investment by foreign investors. In the coming days, sustainability of the market depends on the roller coaster ride of the globe market.
"share market" isn't something you would here a native speaker say. Try "stock market" or just "market" or specify which market you are referring to--there are bunch, after all. Dow Jones, NASDAQ, etc. If you say "stock market" without further clarification I believe most people will assume you mean the Dow Jones Industrial Average as it gets the most publicity.
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Thanks clive I will make sure I won't repeat run-on sentences error again
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