You are crazy, crazy, can there such a separation be ?
You are crazy, crazy, is the soul ever sent away the body ?
When your summer and spring become autumn
When your heart is full with sorrows
You will also understand when you are in other’s hearth without me
When your summer and spring become autumn
When your days call you to account
You will also cry when you are in other’s hearth without me

The memories are page by page
You are piece by piece in my heart
At times go, at last
Your love doesn’t let me live, it kills me
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Heart, not hearth.

What makes you think that this is a poem, Volcano?
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Hearth - Family life; the home.
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We don't go into other people's hearths, Volcano.
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It was a typo!
look

When your heart is full with sorrows
You will also understand when you are in other’s hearth without me

Volcano wrote it correctly at the first line
but then, the typo

I dont understand what u wrote Volcano, do you mind explaining?
Good for you then Mister Micawberhttp://www.englishforums.com/user/czhq/profile.htm
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This is posted at the top of our forum, Volcano:

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Kawthar.K.

I mean when she is with someone else and in his hearth ( to be the bride there), she will also understand my worth
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They're getting married in the fireplace?
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