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Could somebody please check this statement for me.

Thanks
“If I receive a suitable salary with which I can maintain a decent life, I will have a feeling of belonging to the school and then I will participate effectively. But if my salary suffices me for only one week or ten days, then I will end up losing such a feeling and I will lose my interest in everything. Why should I participate while I’m struggling in my life?! Financial matters are very important in any kind of job…All other obstacles can be overcome if this one is sorted out.”
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Hi,

Here are a couple of very, very minor edits.

Are you sure you want to tell your boss that you won't do your job well if you don't get a pay increase?

Best wishes, Clive

“If I receive a suitable salary with which I can maintain a decent life, I will have a feeling of belonging to the school and then I will participate effectively. But if my salary suffices me for only a week or ten days, then I will end up losing such a feeling, and I will lose my interest in everything. Why should I participate while I’m struggling in my life? Financial matters are very important in any kind of job…All other obstacles can be overcome if this one is sorted out.”
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Thanks very much Clive.

By the way, this is not a statement of my own, even though I agree with it.The statement was given by one of my interviewees.