This following is a cloze passage for year 2 pupils. Could someone please edit it? Any suggestions to improve the passage are welcome. Thanks in advance.

One evening, after school, I was waiting for my father to fetch me. It was half past six and yet he had not arrived. Soon I was crying.

My form teacher asked my why and I told her about my problem. She told me not to worry.

Just then somebody tapped me on the right shoulder. I turned around. It was my father. He explained that one of his car tyres had punctured, and he was delayed by the changing of tyres.





These need to be fixed:

My form teacher asked my why

tyre
Tyre is ok.
Students: We have free audio pronunciation exercises.
Ah the British spelling.
Julielai
These need to be fixed:

My form teacher asked my why

tyre

Thanks, Julielai. I'm very often careless! It should be "... asked me why ... "