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Could anyone go through my company profile below? Is there any grammar error or a better statements or room of improvement for the profile? Thank you.Emotion: smile

Here is the content.

MAIN
It has become a known fact that if your business is not running in a computerize environment or on the web, you are behind the times. A computerize environment using software increases the company production and helping management teams operate more efficiently and effectively. A website promotes your services to the world, attracts new business and captures information from interested visitors. In other words, a website acts as your sales force and you want it to make a good impression with your customers. Thus a professional, attractive, and easy to use website is essential in today’s economy.

Many website owners have discovered that by having a website does not ensure that people can find it. Search engines are a major source of traffic to most websites. Our search engine optimization (SEO ranking services) can dramatically increase your visibility on the net and visitors to your website while decreasing advertising costs over the long term. We strongly believe that our SEO ranking services will contribute to your company’s increased exposure and growth by generating more sales. A monthly report will be generated for each SEO customer to keep track of the existing ranking.

Information technologies become more and more important in virtually any business. However, in a competitive business environment, reducing expenditures is very important to keep the costs low. Neosamz Technologies offers services and solutions that can solve your IT tasks while avoiding overexpansion of your IT budget. We are an IT solutions company in Malaysia offering vast variety of services and solutions including:

- Website Design, E-Commerce and Development
- Multimedia, Graphic and Print Design
- Software Engineering and Integration
- Domain Hosting Solutions
- Search Engine Optimization (SEO)

ABOUT
Neosamz Technologies is a professional website design and development, e-commerce solution, multimedia interactive, website promotion and ranking services (SEO solution), domain and hosting registration, software engineering and integration company located in Malaysia. Neosamz Technologies is an IT solutions company emphasizing in software was founded in 2005 by a diverse group of young, result-oriented and strong experienced professionals. The company is specializing in the building and the development of applications for the World Wide Web and Windows-based system. It has a creative approach by mixing art and technology to the design, process flow and uses the most up-to-date technologies.

We are a relatively small and brand new company that enjoys the benefits that come with our size. Our objective is to deliver outstanding marketing solutions at reasonable prices combining impeccable service to cater for nowadays new emerging market. We understand our clients’ needs and requirements. That is why we pay attention to all the development aspects. Our top professionals have a strong motivation and provide a high quality level. Our professional staff has expertise ranging from multimedia website design and development, programming, and software engineering to database and system architecture design. We combine this knowledge with proactive thinking and strategic planning to approach new challenges with your overall business objectives in mind. We aim to be more dynamic, agile and result-oriented with the clients’ needs and requirements paramount to all that we do.

CONTACT
Neosamz Technologies offers you business solutions that can improve the business efficiency. We have accumulated great expertise and experience in working with projects of any size and specialization. We get high quality and originality of every project using modern technologies in our solution. We will deal with you throughout the entire process of development. We are here to serve you. Please feel free to contact us with your questions and to begin discussing how together we can move your business forward.

The best way to contact Neosamz Technologies is by email. Send any emails to Email Removed.

You may also contact us by:
Phone: 603.3291.1888
Fax: 603.3291.1888

Our office hours are:
9am to 7pm Mon-Fri
9am to 2pm Sat
(Time Zone GMT +08:00)

PORTFOLIO
Neosamz Technologies offers affordable services and solutions for small businesses to large enterprises. Gain the competitive edge. We are pleased to present our professional solutions portfolio for a view of our work, along with analyses of the strategic planning and solutions implemented. It speaks for itself.

• Website
• Software
• SEO Services
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hi my dear Neosamz

Thank you for great information .

have a nice day

ambitious from Yemen
Hi Neosamz,

I have edited your company profile. I changed sentences which were too bombastic, trying to keep the language as plain as possible; I shortened sentences which were too long, and I removed those which were repeated.

I also work in IT, and in my experience, it is better to define terms like 'website', 'software', 'Windows', 'search engine', etc. This might sound ridiculous, but many of the people who receive and read these letters aren't as young as you, and won't be very up-to-date with IT.

I removed 'The recommended way to contact us is by email'. I'm not sure how it is in Malaysia, but where I work, many companies that need IT solutions don't even use computers, let alone email.

Here's your revised profile:

MAIN
It has become a common acknowledgment that if your business is not making use of information technology, you are behind the times. A business environment that implements software often benefits from a boost in company production and an easing of the management burden, helping teams operate more efficiently and effectively.

A website promotes your services to the world, attracts new business and grabs the attention of visitors. In other words, a website is an addition to a sales force and it must be made presentable. Thus a professionally produced, attractive, and easy to use website is a necessity in today’s market.

Many website owners are often let down because simply having a website does not ensure that people will find it. Search engines are a major source of traffic to most websites. Our search engine optimization (SEO ranking services) can dramatically increase your visibility on the net, and thus more visitors to your website, while seeing a decrease in advertising costs over the long term. We strongly believe that our SEO ranking services will contribute to your company’s increased exposure and growth by generating more sales opportunities. A monthly report will be produced for each SEO customer to keep track of the current ranking.

Information technology is playing an increasingly important role in virtually any business, from bakeries to banks. However, in a competitive market, reducing expenditure is of obvious importance when it comes to keeping prices as low as possible. Neosamz Technologies offers solutions to many tasks and problems, while avoiding a bloated IT budget. We are an IT solutions company operating in Malaysia, and offering a large variety of services and solutions including:

- Website Design, E-Commerce and Development
- Multimedia, Graphic and Print Design
- Software Engineering and Integration
- Domain Hosting Solutions
- Search Engine Optimization (SEO)

ABOUT
Neosamz Technologies, an IT solutions company that puts an emphasis on software, was founded in 2005 by a diverse group of young, result-orientated and experienced professionals. The company specialises in development of applications for the World Wide Web and Microsoft Windows-based computers. Our approach is creative, mixing art and technology into the design and process flow, and uses the most up-to-date technologies.

We are a relatively small company that enjoys the benefits that come with our size. Our objective is to deliver outstanding marketing solutions at reasonable prices, and to provide an impeccable service to a once emerging, but now established, market. We understand our clients’ requirements. That is why we pay attention to all the aspects of development. Our top professionals are motivated and provide a high quality level. Our professional staff has expertise ranging from multimedia website design and development, programming, and software engineering to database and system architecture. We combine this knowledge with proactive thinking and strategic planning to approach new challenges with your business objectives in mind. We aim to be more dynamic, agile and result-orientated.

CONTACT
Neosamz Technologies offers you information technology solutions that can improve business efficiency. We have accumulated great expertise and experience in working with projects of all sizes and specialisations. We put quality and originality into every project using top-notch technology. We listen to your opinions and suggestions throughout the entire process of development. We are here to serve you. Please feel free to contact us with your questions, and to begin discussing how we can move your business forward.

Contact us by email:
Email Removed.

You may also contact us by:
Phone: 603.3291.1888
Fax: 603.3291.1888

Our office hours are:
9am to 7pm Mon-Fri
9am to 2pm Sat
(Time Zone GMT +08:00)

PORTFOLIO
Neosamz Technologies offers affordable services and solutions for small businesses to large enterprises. Gain the competitive edge. We are pleased to present our professional solutions portfolio for a view of our work, along with analyses of the strategic planning and solutions implemented. It speaks for itself.

• Website
• Software
• SEO Services
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Thank you, Matthew. Thanks for the revised profile. I agreed that we need to define all the technical terms like 'website', 'software' and so on. Do you think if I provide a Links page for the terms (third party URLs) will help me to do the trick?
I suggest that you include a glossary.

To get concise and easy definitions, you can use Google's dictionary search feature. Just type
[url="http://www.google.com.mt/search?hl=mt&q=define%3Awebsite&meta ="]define:website[/url] or [url="http://www.google.com.mt/search?hl=mt&q=define%3Asoftware&meta ="]define:software[/url] into Google Search.

Then you can add links to web pages with encyclopedia definitions, such as [url="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Website "]Wikipedia: Website[/url] or [url="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Software "]Wikipedia: Software[/url].
Thank you very much.
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Here is my company website, http://www.neosamz.com.my. The flash appears on the website is the draft flash design. I have not uploaded the latest flash yet. Please check it out. You suggestion and comment are greatly appreciated. Thank you.
These are the things I noticed:

The menu took too long to load.
The text is too far down the page - the menu needs to be shortened.
The font is small and its colour makes it difficult to read.
The counter looks unprofessional - I think it should go.
The info panels need to be centered, and so does the copyright text.
I will look into your suggestion seriously. thank you. i noticed the font is quite small as well... heehee... do u have any better free web counter to recommend? The font this sitemeter offers is not nice at all.
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