The two maps show datas of the island which is before and another is after the construction of some tourist facilities are built.

Looking at the island before building construction, we can see the length of the island is approximately 200 metres. There are lots of trees in the west and the east.

Moving on to the second map, there are many buildings which are almost located in the west and center of the island. Looking at the center, we can see the reception which is surrounded by vehicle track. Moreover, this track lead to the restaurant in the north and the pier in the south where visitors can go sailing if they want. Furthermore, in the right and left of the reception, there are footpath lead to lots of accommodation.Moreover, on western of the island, there is a beach where visitors go swimming and relax. The footpath connecting the western accommodation units also lead to the beach

In conclusion, comparing two maps, there are lots of changed things and develoment. Not only many facilities are built, but also the island is used for many activities in the future.

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The two maps show datas [ Note that “datas” is not a word. “Data” is a word, but it would be wrong here. “Data” talks about figures/numbers.] of the an island which is before and another is after the construction of some tourist facilities there. are built.

Looking at the maps, island before building construction, we can see the length of the island is approximately 200 metres. There are also some lots of trees in the west, but mostly in and the east of that island. There is also a small beach in the western end.

Moving on to the second map, there are it can be seen that many buildings, which are mostly almost located in the west and center of the island, were constructed. Looking at the center, we can see the In the centre, there is now a reception which is surrounded by a vehicle track. Moreover, this track leads to the restaurant in the north and to the pier in the south where visitors can go sailing if they want. Furthermore, in to the right and left of the reception, there are footpaths leading to lots of several accommodation units/chalets there. Moreover, Furthermore, on the western side of the island, there is a the small beach where has been designated for visitors go swimming and relax. The footpath connecting the western accommodation units also leads to the beach. The trees on both sides of the island are still there.

In conclusion, comparing the two maps, there are lots of changed things the island underwent/saw plenty of changes and development. Not only have many accommodation facilities are been built [ note the inversion], but also the island is used for now boasts several amenities for the convenience of visitors. activities in the future.

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