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Could you please help me correct these sentences please?

- There is a big difference between when she has make up and when she's au naturel./between before the surgery and after.

- You're as tired when you sleep 6 hours as when you sleep 14 hours if not more tired./You are more tired when you sleep 14 hrs than when you sleep 6 hrs.

- You won't love me more in 5 years than in 4 years. It's not as if you will ove me more as the years go/go by. ????

- The store has been selling more and more over the past few months.

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alc24Could you please help me correct these sentences please?

- There is a big difference between when she has make up and when she's au naturel./between before the surgery and after.

- There is/There's a big difference between when she has make-up on, and when she's au naturel.

- You're as tired if you sleep 6 hours as when you sleep 14 hours, if not even more.
You are more tired when you sleep 14 hrs than when you sleep 6 hrs.

- You won't love me any more in 5 years, (ADD COMMA) than in 4 years. It's not as if you will love me more as the years go by.

- The store has been selling more and more over the past few months.

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Terryxpress
- You're as tired if you sleep 6 hours as when you sleep 14 hours, if not even more.

You are more tired when you sleep 14 hrs than when you sleep 6 hrs.


Why did you change 'when' to 'if,' Terryxpress (in the first but not the second)? Emotion: thinking

GB shows more results for 'when' than 'if.'