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Dear Teachers,

Could you please tell if there are any mistakes left in the lines below? These are to be the conclusive lines of a speech.

P.S. If anything sounds weird or childish to you, please make that professional. I want to leave a good impact on the audience's mind biding them farewell.

Thanks a lot in advance.

Regards, Hungry

You will be fed up wading through the issues, but they will probably never end up. So wrapping up my speech, I hope you would have liked and agreed with my words, and they would have affected your minds in some way.
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HungryDear Teachers,

Could you please tell if there are any mistakes left in the lines below? These are to be the concluding lines of a speech.

P.S. If anything sounds weird or childish to you, please make that professional. I want to leave a good impact on the audience's mind bidding them farewell.

Thanks a lot in advance.

Regards, Hungry

You will be fed up [Not a term I would use in this situation - I suggest "You may become tired of..."] wading through the issues, but they will probably never end up. So wrapping up my speechin conclusion., I hope you would have liked and agreed with my words, and that they would have affected your minds in some way.
Thank you, Feebs.Emotion: smile